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*updated* [tech/trance] Takkra- The Balletdancer (Original Mix) (Full)
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| Takkra |
The track is updated and finished so far in my eyes :).. put a tad more emotion in it :p
[ click for full version ]
Thanks again for you time :)
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Now do not be misleaded by the sweet title, I dedicated this song to a special friend of mine who talked me through alot of difficult times, we developed feelings for eachother and what not.. but "we" could simply not be.:rolleyes: .. (it's true!)
Everything still sounding *ahh* "sweet", but this girl is pretty wild and crazy herself, but on the other side also very, very intelligent for her age :)
This track, however short and maybe simple sounding to some, should give a nice description of her character.. :)
I hope you will discover some emotion in the track because I made it with a lot of it ;)
enough for the bla, here's the stuff.
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A comment would be nice, and it would, ofcourse, be appreciated a lot
Thanks in advance! |
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| Takkra |
| thanks man! ill check yours out! |
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| Akia |
| Awesome! Really driving, you just canīt deny it :toocool: |
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| the_perfecter |
| Great track I am not too much into the tech stuff but I like it. |
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| Takkra |
Cheers guys :)!!
thanks for listening! |
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| Mr Rogers |
you have improved tons buddy ;)
great percussion work! nice'n'bang'n.
not a huge fan of the synth that comes in 2:30ish, but just personal taste.
great job ;) |
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| Takkra |
whoa. gee thanks boss:)
I can remember you were the first one ever to comment on my very first track :D
glad you liked it! |
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| Mr Rogers |
| quote: | Originally posted by Takkra
whoa. gee thanks boss:)
I can remember you were the first one ever to comment on my very first track :D
glad you liked it! |
haha, u got a good memory :) |
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| richg101 |
hey sexy.
nice new version you have here. mixing is good though a few of the percs sound a bit loud in the mix.. also i feel that it feels a little too clean. maybe add another slightly detuned mirror of your arp synth. this will fill up some empty spaces and give it more of a fullness. i like the sounds at 4:04. now the track is sounding full but maybe make some of the sounds more wet with efx/reverb. i thyink the main thing about this track is the arrangement. with a more designed buildup/break main and outro the track would make a killer tune on the dancefloor.
overall great as i expected champ:) |
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| NorthStar |
Nice Track man!!
Bassiline is ok! And hi-hat very bad.
But track is ok!
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| Takkra |
thanks for listening you two!!
rich thanks for all the pointers :) Ill take that in advice when I renew it..
northstar, I knew the highat was bad:p but SOMEONE suggested a techno'ish hihat haha |
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