[Something between dark psytrance and prog] Roman Cherno - Paganka
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DJ-Kreing^^ |
Hi everyone!
Its been awhile since I actually got a track done, so here im sharing it with you. It�s the unmastered version and there is still lots of room for improvement so im looking for some good constructive critics here.
Btw I cut the intro and outro out and also faded some parts. Just in case I make some more progress with this one, hope you are ok with this.
Cheers!
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http://download.yousendit.com/72C35D770E603535 |
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DJ-Kreing^^ |
Come on guys i would really appreciate some feedback here. |
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DJ Kenosis |
Roman, the second link is expired. |
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DJ Kenosis |
Listening ....
- I think the kick may be a tad too high
- the breaks kind of threw me for a second, but overall it contributes well to the track. I like how you go into breaks periodically.
- Very nice feel at around the 1:30-2:00 range and 2:30-3:15.
You could probably do something more to develop this a bit as it gets just a bit too minimalistic for my tastes. But the feel of the track is pretty nice.
- Not into the high synth pattern that comes in around 2:15 and 3:45-4:45. It sounds very off key.
Overall, if you could get rid of that offkey pattern then I think you're definitely onto a good opening track for a psytrance set. |
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