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David Gowans - Soul
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gowansy
Hi, ive been messing around with a tune, still needs more elements i think but my computer is really struggling with ableton at the moment. anyways here it is:

http://www.myspace.com/davidgowansmusic
richg101
hey david.

a fresh kickdrum you are using. it is nice. i like the blippy sounds contrasting with your bass/strings etc. it works well.

im not sure about the arrangement. but the sound is nice and full.

vocal is a bit out of place. maybe it should be more dry and quieter in the mix.

overall i think there are enough elements in this one. dont add any more. just get the mix as good as possible.

great work with a nice original touch.

rich
gowansy
thanks for the comments :D i'll try it out with the vocals, yeah i don't really want to add lots of unneccesary things as i want to keep it quite simple, i really need to sort the arrangement out as you've said, its my first complete tune, i usually just mess around making 10 second loops so im having difficulty with arrangement n that :(
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