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| rb2k1 |
Hey just wanted to know what you guys and girls think of my song! I have it on mp3.com so you can download it faster! Ok well just lemme know!!1
Click Here To Listen!!!
Thanks ALL!!
-rb2k1 |
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| dj dave b |
hey dude, nice work
it's always hard to give people your opinion on how something could be better without making them feel bad!, so please don't take what im saying here as a negative!, im just giving you my opinion :)
first of all, you can definetly lay out a track, only bad side is the sounds.
they all seem to me, to sound a little weak, the kick could be more punchy (louder) the bassline screams out boring! hehe
if you were to experiment with each sound in this track, tweaking it and making it sound a little more full, i think it would improve it by 100% easy!, the volume of the kick and the bassline greatly effect your track, so much so that if you were to take a cool song and give it a bassline, or give it a weak pathetic sounding kick it would turn the song into complete crap, a good bassline really makes a track! :)
hope this helps!
keep working on it! :D
cheers
dave |
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| rb2k1 |
| Hey Thanks For Taking the time out to check it out! Please anyone else lemme know please! thanks |
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| DjArktik |
I agree witht he bass and kick issue...a little more criticism :)
you gotta use different snare rolls man...can tuse the same one thru the song that often...maybe something with some triplets or 16ths...you dont seem to have a main melody to the track...you have a few different kinds of synth going at different times, but nothing really stands out...maybe slow it down a bit too, not in bpm but the urgency to keep going in teh song...
the synth i do hear though is suprisingly cool sounding though, get new samples and work on this a bit, you could have a kick ass tune... |
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| Dj Tilo |
Fruityloops rulez!!!
Not bad, but as the others said there is no melody(ohh I just saw it's progressive Trance...ooops).
Tip: Add more Instruments it sounds a little empty with just
5 or 6 Instruments banging in the main part
Keep up the good work...(advertisment)when you need a
remix...just email me..*gg* |
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