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[minimal trance/atmospheric] J.R. Garcia - Dreaming of you
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| R.j. |
This has got to be the best production since awhile... something I actually finished. The recent tracks I posted were old, so, the sound is drastically different.
There some work left in this peice, but I think it's at a decent status.
It's minimal, but has a fairley good progression (at least, I think it does...)
And if you're wondering... the vocals are my own creations, haha, so, yeah get ready to laugh.
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| Akia |
Nice dreamy atmosphere! Just think it could do in a slower tempo, maybe. The vocals are cool, but way to overused imo. Nice effects! Good job! :cool:
Takere!
Akia |
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| Beatflux |
| It sounds really messy at the end. |
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| R.j. |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
Nice dreamy atmosphere! Just think it could do in a slower tempo, maybe. The vocals are cool, but way to overused imo. Nice effects! Good job! :cool:
Takere!
Akia |
Thanks for the comment; I really appreciate it.:D |
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| R.j. |
| quote: | Originally posted by Beatflux
It sounds really messy at the end. |
wow, thanks:rolleyes: |
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| HarryMoore |
| not my cup of tea, the percussion is ok, but overused, the base isnt punchy enough, nor is the kick. it's VERY repetative and needs more elements. try and get the individual track's clearer and get some intresting leads and hopefully this would improve it |
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| R.j. |
| quote: | Originally posted by HarryMoore
not my cup of tea, the percussion is ok, but overused, the base isnt punchy enough, nor is the kick. it's VERY repetative and needs more elements. try and get the individual track's clearer and get some intresting leads and hopefully this would improve it |
finally! some real criticsm!
You don't know how much that means to me.... although, i did the percussion like that on purpose.
Thanks anyways!:D |
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