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First Track - First Project:: Please Comment
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Khayat
Dear TA this is our first project please comment as we are at stage 90 % I think and we need to finish it
Please comment on the subject the main tune and NOT THE QUALITY.I know the quality is but I will re record it and master it after its 100 %.
The Track is called SOLITUDE
HERE IS THE LINK
MYSPACE

...AND DO U THINK ITS WORTH??
THANKSSSSSSSSSSSS in advance
Mr.Mystery
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74
Khayat
Yes I know but as I said its not finished and I dont need to promote as Im still asking you guys
offthebeat
good track, i think itll be better if the melody would come at 01:15, it sounds a bit empty at that point. Good melodies, I like them. Track needs couple more instruments i'd say. try to get rid off emptiness, create more variaty, so the listener wont get bored. hope that helps.
Khayat
thanx maaan I will work on it
jey
sounds ok, kinda dull after a wile! muddy and distorted is the first thing that hits me!
Khayat
whatdo u think does it need ?
jey
id personally add more life to it! get it more uplifting but u may be after the sorrow sound
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