| kitphillips |
I'm really jealous of the harpsichord/ guitar sound you have here... it all sounds quite good to me.
In the beginning at around the 1 minute mark, there are two leads which chop and change, playing the main melody, I would crossfade these to make the transitions smoother.
Theres also a long silence at 2:15 which seems to go on for two bars, I'd make it shorter, or go straight into your acid sound from the buildup.
Its a really good effort I think esp. as its not finished. Its a little rough, but I'll definately be looking foward to hearing it when its done. |
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