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File Corrupted - One More Day (Radio Edit)
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| File_Corrupted |
Hi guys :) I finished my newest track called One More Day and I would like to get some comments and feedback.
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> Artist :: File Corrupted
> Title :: One More Day (Radio Edit)
> Genre :: Progressive Trance
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| Akia |
Really nice atmosphere, dark and dreamy! Awesome break! I like the main synth too. Good job with this FC! :cool:
Takere!
Akia |
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| Bidor |
Agreed with Akia, nice atmosphere. i like the part where the bass jumps in, however i think your "guitar" sounding synth is a little overpowering.. and repetitive. maybe have a little arp on the background to make it more dreamy.. i really like the bass maybe turn up the volume up a bit for more groove.
good tune mate!:) |
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| NorthStar |
| Good song man! But hi-hat's some high eq. |
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| DJSentinel |
I was expecting something more in the way of bassline. Maybe add a higher bassline with a driving pattern. Not necessarily a roller, but some offbeat counter rhythm. As for the rest of the track, I would try to add a more noticable progression in the main part. You tend to stay very close to the root of your key, and I think that if you shifted that bassline down sometimes it would make it sound more interesting.
peace
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| Spliph |
like your intro, and perc fx! the bass can be a lil phatter, try eqing it some more and cut the low(20khz), smooth melodies...is almost distorted..but i like it.
nice break! :)i think there can be more melody synths in the break.
and i agree, guitarsynthie after the break needs to change more..
good use of reverse delay clap ;)
can have just a TAD more cleaerer sounding variety! but i like it a lot |
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