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[Emotional Darktrance] Takkra - MDLN (Original Mix) full track.
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| Takkra |
a track i've been working on for a couple of days now, I finished it in a total of eight hours, which includes six hours of doodling around and twisting random buttons because I didn't know what to do with such an emotional melody :).
Hope you guys enjoy!
[ clicketyclick ]
Thanks in advance! |
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| Akia |
The melody is awesome, emotionell and nice atmosphere! But I´m not sure about the synth that playing the main part... think it sounds a bit muddy. I like it anyway, good jobb! :cool:
Takere!
Akia |
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| Xenocreator_PG_ |
0:30 the fat bass's LFO makes it swing in & out of tune. Gives it a rustic feel... I like it!!
1:55 the hihats now give it a little more momentum.
2:15 hihats stop. I think they need to be bought into the mix a little sooner to get the momentum going between 1:40 & 2:15. The track doesn't seem to pick itslf up & drive; and then break at 2:30 slows it down again. Percs will this help IMO... Also needs a heavier hihat or driving cymbal.
2:55 I like the high distorted layer.
3:00 the gated pads are great.
4:18 another break. The drive suffers by these break IMO, make it like an insomniac. I love the elements you have put together: Nice pads, warm bass & interesting high synth are all good! Just lacks drive through parts. The high distorted synth could be coupled with a mid layer when the beat kicks in IMO.
It's actually quite a pleasure to listen too. Again all the elements sound great. It send me into a relaxing trance. Nice work Takkra |
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| Takkra |
Akia thanks for the notice! ill check it out, im glad you liked it :)!
Xenocreator_PG_, a thousand thanks for your always constructive feedback :) im happy you enjoyed the track, ill see how I can put more drive in the track! thanks for the advice for that! |
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| Bidor |
great melodies and atmosphere in this, turn up the kick volume a little bit.. definatly add more percussions throughout the tune, its lacking a few. i really like the bass, and main leads sound cool to. would love to have a go at remixing if thats ok with you;) just sent me the pack:)
cheers buddy, great work! 8/10.
Bidor:) |
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| richg101 |
great warm sound you got on this one mate. sounding full and nice. maybe a bit more sparkle to the sound would improve. arrangement is also an issue that will improve it. try basing around a svd style techno tune as an example of a better arranement.
definately your finest track sonically.
keep it up mate:) |
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