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UPDATE: Sample of my uplifting track reworked
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| Haak |
Reworked it now, it's longer and much much better IMO. Sounds less cheesy too :D
Sample is without the bassline
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Feedback appreciated:) |
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| trancenation |
| the 3rd and forth measure sound a little strange.. funny chord |
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| Boy trance |
| Yeah, there's something about the melody that doesn't seem quite right. But you can work with it, I know you have good taste in trance, just let it show in your work! |
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| Haak |
| you guys are right. I think I'll remake the melody completely. It was just something I layed out in 10 mins |
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| robstar |
| quote: | Originally posted by trancenation
the 3rd and forth measure sound a little strange.. funny chord |
Yep. Sounds kinda False if ya ask me. but other then that the first part sounds good! :) |
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| Haak |
| guys, check out the new sample please :) |
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| robstar |
@ 0:00 - 0:13
Sounds better... but still not awsome.....
@ 0:14
WOW...
That sounds good!
The melody really switched shape there.
The first bars of it sound great, but I donīt like when the melody goes down. I would like it to go up instead...but thatīs just a question boutī taste.
Itīs much better!
LAter:Z..... |
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| Haak |
| thanks for your comment robstar. I'm pretty pleased with it now, but I'll experiment some more with it, try if it's better to make it "go up" as you said |
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| Boy trance |
Well, it's an improvement from the first!
Keep working on it! :) |
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