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Takkra - Armata (Original Mix) full track
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| Takkra |
been working on this for quite some time, trancy. worked on the lead for three days layering and eq'ing. kthnxbye
trance
192kb/s
full track
7:07
[ clickety ]
thx in advnc
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| richg101 |
everything sounds great in this mate!
wicked mix. tough drive. well chosen sounds too.
your arrangement needs a bit of a change imo. so the track breaksdown earlier and allows more variation.
i think even editing this version would allow for a slightly better dancefloor affect..
you get better every track man:) |
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| Bidor |
hey man great tune;)
here's the remix!
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| DigitalDisaster |
Introduction is pretty solid, although those hats (Sounds like DNC_Hat if you're using FLStudio -- I think DNC Hat 4 would sound better) with the dealy on them (or what sounds like delay) should change. This is of course a very minor part of the song... just my 2 cents.
Intro to synth is nice... I always like that reverse kick sound :) . The wave "sweep" effect is solid and well mastered. Pad sounds like it could use a little work, for some reason it sounds a little off key, and laying down a nice free filter on it to fade it in would be optimal, imo.
Breakdown is decent... I think you could've used a better string sample for your pattern there, and the new synth to me sounds decent but a little random. Geez how did you get that nice reverb effect on the percussions (3:59)?! Sounds nice -- you should tune that up or at least do it after each crash!
Overall it was a smooth track, I think you could do more with the lead synth and string patterns... but then again it's a question of taste. Keep up the good work! |
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| Akia |
Sounds really cool, great melodies and nice pulse! Maybe it could need some more variation, as Rich said but I enjoyed! :cool:
Takere!
Akia |
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| Spliph |
great kick mate, nice bassy play. you introduce a melody change with the bass, i think you can make it monotone, just my opinion, bettr for dancefloor and easier to float away to. also, try killing beats on the 1/8 of 8 bars, so you gte a fresh sound that sounds more surprising? i like the pad "whine" sound. it can even be better! :)
string is nice, add some distortion so that it sounds phattttter, or another layer?
nice filter breakish thing going on. full of emotion. i think you can enhance that ''pad'' because that is what your track is about, screamin somethin.. and the lead is nice :) reallllly nice! =)
keeep pushin the sound mate!
cheers |
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