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[tech/club] a new joint....
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| ASFSE |
http://www.myspace.com/glassstiger
it should be the first song to play, but if not then check 4.21.07sirens.
it's a work in progress, but you can see how it's comin' togethor...
pce.
--=*UPDATED 4.26.07*=--
added the title and changed some things, im done with this for now...gonna let it sit around and i'll come back to it with fresh ears... |
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| Akia |
Sounds pretty cool, but a bit too repetitive for my taste right now. Nice puls. Keep working! :cool:
Takere!
Akia |
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| offthebeat |
| not my type of music, but i can tell u got some skills, respect! |
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| ASFSE |
| thnx for the listens:) |
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| Zombie0729 |
tuned in here...
i like the stuttered white noise fx... chop it up a bit more for some added rhythm though
not sure how i feel about the whole thing being sidechained... maybe add a really tight snare or a punchy'r kick because as much as sidechain makes its own rhythm this seems to null it a bit
ok the horn/high string... i can't handle it. still can't handle it. yup, hate it.
i do like the bassline, i think its eq'd at a perfect spot and i don't think you need to change it. instead of having a high string side chain'd try some stabbier synths on the 1st and last measure of hte bassline. something very analogue sounding
needs some work but could be cool
Anthony |
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| Allied Nations |
| quote: | Originally posted by Zombie0729
not sure how i feel about the whole thing being sidechained... maybe add a really tight snare or a punchy'r kick because as much as sidechain makes its own rhythm this seems to null it a bit
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Totally-
It needs punchier highs in the percussion, it lacks that bite at the moment.
solid effort, great work in progress. I like the horn string, bit played out but it workds |
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| ASFSE |
| i appreciate your comments, and i'll look in to the things mentioned. |
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| G-Con |
not bad, needs a bit more variation here and there for my taste. The high siren sound needs a bit more texture, it feels a bit too static (apart from the pitch changes of course).
Like others have said, its lacking enough high freq percussion, sounds a bit muffled.
Reading this back I sound as though I think its crap which I dont but these are the things I would work on... |
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| ASFSE |
well when i get some time i will make changes(i really need some better monitors), and take into consideration everything you guys have mentioned...
thnx for listening gcon..i see u have a new work up, i'll check it out when i get home-- at school right now.
pce! |
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| ASFSE |
-=*UPDATED 4.26.07*=-
made some changes |
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