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[Melodic Trance] - Biosphere (5 mins)
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| YellowSun |
Hi!
i'm looking for comments on this tune i'm working on, i think it's alright at the moment, but it can surely get better, it always can!
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| Bassaka |
Cool effect & pads in the beginning. When the arps slam in. I love it. The melody/progression you have going on here, is insanely unique and very intense. When the 4x4 comes in, I don't like the OHH paired on the offbeat, yet. The clap is wayyyy too dry, smack some reverb on that. Oh, and I'd wait awhile to slam the bass in fully. I really enjoy it where its just the light arpies with the strings in focus. When the percs drop out and its just the kick and arps/pads. Its gorgeous. When its all in full, its very strong. You have a significant amount of work to do, but for now you have it set out in front of you and its rolling.
Ah, now we're at the break. Awesome strings/pads effects. The arps OWNS. OMG, when the bass comes in, that sound is just bad ass... I love it. Sweet, when the kick comes in. Oh, nice bass. I thought this progression would get boring, but it doesn't. Its played a massive role in this as a whole, and it just keeps me going. OH... and it stops. ... lol jk.
Great job man!!! Really enjoyed this. I think you have something big here. Now, go produce the hell out of it!
Matt Blair |
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| YellowSun |
Matt, what u said made my day!
Good idea about the clap, i will get some reverb on it. Whats wrong with the hihat, is it too standard?
Gonna experiment with the bass in the beginning, why didnt i think of that.. been so focused on the later parts...
i'm very happy that you dig the melodies!
Thanks man, u gave me some ideas |
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| Glengie |
| Wow man, thats inspiring. After listening to this, im litterally about to take something ive been working on and completely revamp it. |
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| YellowSun |
| Thanks Glengie! what are you working on? |
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| Glengie |
| I'm working on a track called Electrify. Link is in my signature below, its not quite to the caliber as to what you are producing but hey, I'm working on it! |
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| seventyseven |
Hey m8!
Nice music! Like Your pad in the beginning and Your arp
:) very nice bassline... orginal...
meybe percussion needs little space...
kick is very good...driving in...
meybe sounds little repetitive but I enjoyed it
Greetings
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| YellowSun |
thanks for the reply mate!
you are right, i gotta spice up the percs a bit i think
glad u enjoyed it :happy2:
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| Nemesis44 |
Hey there
Nice track.
You have some nice ideas coming together for sure.
The over all balance in the mix is pretty good in my ears but everything still sounds a little bit centered. Experiment with some panning and also stereo widening on the higher frequencies.
Perhaps the hi-hat could be a little bit more interesting but it does the job for the track.
What I might also be tempted to do is lower the bass you have a little and then write an acompanying bass line that has a slightly higher frequency to put a bit more drive into the track. (That's what I would do anyway).
At the moment the bass is a little flat. Hmmmm now that I listen closer you do have another bassline there but it's not defined or present enough in my opinion.
Great work though.
Enjoyed listening to this.
Cheers
Nem |
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| YellowSun |
thanks you so much for the comments Nem, u had a lot of sound things to say.
i know what u mean about the hihat, i just put a really basic hihatloop on the track, to get something going.. gotta change it to something a little more interesting at least.
i'm currently working only in headphones so i have some trouble getting a good stereoimage, but i will try to experiment some with the fruity stereo enhancer! :cool:
yeah there is actually a sub bas, although it's barely hearable i suppose, i'm not at all satiesfied with that sound!
i'm glad u enjoyed it mate!
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