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Zone Breaker - Wild Nights (DJ Beta Ice's Projeto de Clube Rapaz Remix)(preview)
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| dj beta ice |
"http://www.djbetaice.com/music/Zone Breaker - Wild Nights (DJ Beta Ice's Projeto de Clube Rapaz Remix)(preview).zip"
sooo Zoney went all out with this one...amazing melody, and an amazing tune....it should be coming out in a week or two, but here's a sample of my remix which may be released with the original...
trying to create a little hype for a huge release... |
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| B_man |
I didn't wanna download anything, so I visited your Myspace page.
I don't like that bassline. It sounds like the saw-waves are dragging, and all the warmth of it has been ruined. You see, I think you've dragged that synth's oscillators to an uncomfortable octive, and now they are draggin across the gravel road like some smuck dragging roadkill. The kick is buried beneath all of the other elements, and the lead melodies kinda cheesy. I'll go as far as to say that my old Casio keyboard has a better trance drumkit.
Then the elements hit a wall so that an acid line can start up. I was listening to this totally incoherent buildup, and then BAM, I felt my forehead swell up as soon as that acid line smack dab in the middle of ackward silence. Then there is this wierdo synth that sounds like a farting Tuba before...
[orgasm]!?! "Hush Your Mouth?" Please don't tell me the "hush your mouth" is what I think it is from (an old Disney cartoon), cuz if it is, I'm just gonna cry under a rock and drink jack daniels until my head explodes.
This tune really didn't make much sense to me. The arrangement was lacking, the dynamics of mixing inconsistent, and the melodies just plain cheesy without a purpose.
You came here with big symphonies... but I think you need to give it a few years before you get me all excited about your next big release. |
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| dj beta ice |
| alright, thanks for the constructive critism, I'm very new to producing, been producing for almost 6 months...thanks a lot, I'll take it into consideration. |
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| Bidor |
i dont know the original, but this sounds cheesy as lol:p
so ing happy:stongue:
i like the bassline though... nice breakdown i like your synth choice there, add some more percussions throughout the tune to give it that extra groove, however when its about to climax you take away the bassline?!?! why?
nice ideas in this, but definatly needs more work.
6/10
greetz,
Bidor:) |
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| dj beta ice |
ya ya its suppose to be a little happy-ish....but thanks for the constructive critisism
| quote: | | i dont know the original, but this sounds cheesy as lol |
not out yet...coming out very soon
| quote: | | however when its about to climax you take away the bassline?!?! why? |
its a lot longer btw....this is a mini preview of it...sooo you might think thats it, but its really not |
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