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Cjr2 & Exceed - The Anthem 2007 (Original Mix) [Full320Kbps] <--
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| Bidor |
thanks to : Sm44, Sterilis, Dj_Eternal & Glengie for posting feedback on the first version, this is the final and finished version of our tune,
its a mix between break-beat/house/trance, our aim was to try and create something unique.. its hard to tell what genre this tune exactly is..
anyway i do hope i get some good feedback on this,
after my hard work on the tune and reviewing almost 1 page of tunes today:p
enjoy guys and feedback will be returned if i havent listened to your tune yet.
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greetz,
Bidor:)
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| DJ_Eternal |
Love the beginning, and dare i say it, sounds Alphazone-ish :)
Nice pumping kickdrum and you have created some nice percs to accomodate the kick.
I'm still thinking some of the sounds used are a little dry, maybe a little more reverb, or change them altgother. The bass sound is not too bad.
The synth that starts at 0:39 secs that sounds like a piano also sounds a little dry. The sound itself created is quite likeable and fits into the track nicely. I'm not really sure what you could do with that one to improve it.
Some of your higher end FX are really nice and well used throughout the track, that's something i could improve on myself.
The lead sound lacks any power but I don't think it needs any, as it's never sounded like an epic trancer anyway.
All in all a good track, keep it up :) |
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| Bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ_Eternal
Love the beginning, and dare i say it, sounds Alphazone-ish :)
Nice pumping kickdrum and you have created some nice percs to accomodate the kick.
I'm still thinking some of the sounds used are a little dry, maybe a little more reverb, or change them altgother. The bass sound is not too bad.
The synth that starts at 0:39 secs that sounds like a piano also sounds a little dry. The sound itself created is quite likeable and fits into the track nicely. I'm not really sure what you could do with that one to improve it.
Some of your higher end FX are really nice and well used throughout the track, that's something i could improve on myself.
The lead sound lacks any power but I don't think it needs any, as it's never sounded like an epic trancer anyway.
All in all a good track, keep it up :) |
Thanks for the constructive feedback mate, enjoyed reading it!:) |
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| B_man |
Sounds like a really banging, groovy prog-break piece. Sometimes there are times when it sounds more like a large conglomarate of timbres than perfectly unified, mixing wise, but I really can't complain.
Somehow, this reminds me of video game music more than standard EDM.
YOur acid-bass was a nice idea. I like the resonance of it.
Nice supersaw. It doesn't overstate itself, nor does it subtract from other elements. It is not perfect, but I think it's fairly hip.
I agree about your higher end FX... they sound evolved.
Good work. Not totally my cup of tea, but not something I dislike by any means. |
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| Bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by B_man
Sounds like a really banging, groovy prog-break piece. Sometimes there are times when it sounds more like a large conglomarate of timbres than perfectly unified, mixing wise, but I really can't complain.
Somehow, this reminds me of video game music more than standard EDM.
YOur acid-bass was a nice idea. I like the resonance of it.
Nice supersaw. It doesn't overstate itself, nor does it subtract from other elements. It is not perfect, but I think it's fairly hip.
I agree about your higher end FX... they sound evolved.
Good work. Not totally my cup of tea, but not something I dislike by any means. |
thanks for the reply chief:thepirate |
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| Takkra |
hahaha this stuff is great!!!
the bass is really pumping :), where the fcku did I hear that bass before ;)? great grove!
..wtf did you get those awesome fx?
1:00 the arp works nice :)
i don't like the "hard" kick in the beginning (although I sometimes do that too :))
nice woosh go out fx, sweet pad!
breakbeat has been done nicely.
2:24 oops kick out of place there?
kick takes up alot of compression I hear.
nice saws btw!
anthem idea is really well expressed in this track
4:48 damn! this sounds very, very solarstone/ darren tate
great job you guys :) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey dude,
The tune sound feels too midle end for me, dont be afraid to add a bit of high end to the drums, synths, the tune feels kinda flat for me(Sound).
I concur abotu the videogame comment, this would fit pretty good a Rayman videogame or sort of.
In overall, not bad at all, I just would try to add abit of high end to the tune and COMPRESSION, some sounds like the drums feel a bit to dry, flat, and not sounding fully mixed with the rest of the sounds, wich creates a feeling of lack of fullness.
Kopi =o. |
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| Subtle |
Listening:
It sounds descent at the beginning... lot of sounds and stuff.. seemed u had fun in the making. Although i have to agree with Kopi that it sounds a bit flat.. the dynamics are very good.. need more high end.
But all in all i can hear that your percussion has improved. |
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| Bidor |
| thanks all! feedback returned! :) |
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