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Mike Rohrbach - Deliver
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| eXo |
First off, I've only put a few hours into this song, and I plan on putting many more and figuring out where I need to go with it and such.
Just want some peeps to give it a listen and let me know what ya'll think and if I'm heading in the right direction or not.
Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
Enjoy the sample.
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| eXo |
| Anyone willing to give me some ideas, or tell me what they think, I'll do the same for any one of your tracks. |
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| TaylorR |
might want to add more percussion and FX to give it more of an atmosphere.
that bass you got goin is pretty cool.
change the patterns up a little or add more elements to the track. I know you've only put a few hours into it but if done right, this track can come out pretty damn good.
by the way, might you know what Rohrbach means? |
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| eXo |
| No idea really, I know the direct translation, do you know? |
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| TaylorR |
i think it's something about villagers and a river.
or wayyyyyyyyy back then, a rohrbacher was basically someone who lived in a village near a river....i think.
My bro and i tried to do some research about it but we couldn't seem to find something that we thought was accurate. |
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| eXo |
| Do we share the same last name? |
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| TaylorR |
Rohrbacher
:D
how's the track coming along? |
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| eXo |
Just added this weird windpipe type sound, and a breakbeat type dealio in the beginning, I think it's starting to come along nicely, I need to come up with a nice long melody or something, heh.
Deliver V2 |
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| TaylorR |
it is coming along nicely. just keep at it.
also, the thing panned to the right is a nice add in but it can be quite distracting for some since it's always on the right side.
good work so far! |
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