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Falken - Dreams Will Fade (uplifting trance)
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| B_man |
Interesting, sounds like a stadium monster of a track. I don't really like the bass's bottom end that much, you did something with a boobass like thingie that sounds a tad ackward FM-ish. It's more apparent at the beginning of the track. The piano sounds like a dark piano in FL, perhaps overused. Otherwise, I like what's building up here. THe piano seems to fit when the other elements and chording structure is on display.
I really like the flow of the track now... you've got a kicking groove and a lovely elevation to the mood. However, the piano is very simplistic and that makes it just a tad cheesy, but I can't think offhand of a way to strengthen the piano line without making the track melt into cheesy brats.
Um... please change that mini-saw lead that you've got going on there. It's sounds to C-64ish for the rest of the track. You ruined the mood, in my honest opinion.
You've got some very promising material here. You've got the idea here, and the synth and texturing you use is ace. Just change the track from the last breakdown before the cooldown and you will really keep most people here happy. Oh yeah, don't forget to modify your bassline a tad. |
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| sm44 |
Yeah really like this track but as said before that piano is way to simplistic and sounds pretty bad
maybe using cords instead of notes would make it sound a bit better and some notes in between
also i dont think that saw lead at the end is terrible it just needs some tweeking to fatten it up and make it sound better
but i like the flow of this track and the rest of it sounds good! |
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| godsendxd |
i really love the flow of your track but i would get rid of that piano and use a nice pluck your choice but.
overall i like it nice cant wait to hear finished version.! |
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| Falken_za |
Thanks for the crit, guys :)
I completely changed the bassline and I'm now trying to sort out the piano line. Just a question: what did you mean by stadium monster? Too much reeverb/delay? |
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| seventyseven |
Hey m8!
Nice track... It reminds me Robert Miles
but I think the melodies are too simply...
It seems trance-style around 90's (like ATB,R Miles,DJ Quicksilver) overall nice but not futurable...
sth like classic-trance track
6.5/10
Greetz ;) |
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