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ETP - The Realm *Vocal Included*
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| JoeyEnv |
I kinda reworked the intro to be more melodic and uplifting so the break comes in and bang. I would appreciate some feedback to help me improve this track because I think it has potential. Every little helps.
>>HI-FI STREAM<<
I should mention this is only a sample. Full version is being worked on. |
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| Frost-RAVEN |
Not bad...did you record those vocals? Though they are so spaced out its a bit hard to focus on them...Though the track is a bit cheese...I'm not sure why...Sorry I cant put my figure on it...Though i did bump this from the bottom...maybe somebody else will see it and give their comments.
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=427937&forumid=74&s=
Check out my tune. |
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| Vibrasoul |
| Sorry, but this old C'hantal accapella from 1991 has to be one of the most worn out samples ever used in electronic dance music. Just drop it! :rolleyes: |
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| Akia |
I like the intro very mutch but when the rest comes in, 0:47, it sounds like another tune to me, to different. Maybe that will be better when the track is finished... The vocals are good but I agree with Frost-RAVEN, think they are a bit to spaced out. But it has potential, keep it up! :)
Takere!
Akia |
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| G-Con |
love the start. Really lush, nice pianos.
Wasn't expecting how it then kicks in. not bad but different to the start. Maybe work a little more on the transition there.
Percussion sounds a little basic to me, maybe add a few more elements to beef it up a bit. I'd aim for a techy groove with the percussion to give the track a bit more rhythm.
overall, seems promising. would like to see how it will go into the next breakdown.
Keep at it.. |
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| Illumin |
| I think you need to centralize/mono-ize your lower end a bit, everything is so spread out it doesn't mix/blend well with the rest of the frequencies used in your mix, lacks the drive and oomph |
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