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Avenger-Depression(Original Emotive Mix)Looking 4 big label. Any help?Sample included
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| avengie |
Hey Guys... I am looking for a good label for this track.... The best i have done so far.... If anyone interested or willing to help me get to it, i appreciate it.....
I included a sample with it too....
Here you go
http://download.yousendit.com/03B27F6F281A86FC
Cheers :D |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Listening to it as I go along...
The kick doesn't sound right, it's too sharp.
The percussions are very lacking, they don't create any movement to the track. I think the main synths are too loud in the mix. In general, the mixdown sounds a bit weird - it's as if the different elements sit "on top" of each other rather than blend in to a complete tune. I can't quite explain it. This might be because of the synths being too loud compared to the bass. Also, the bell-like synth in the last part doesn't sound right at all - it almost sounded off key there but I can't be certain...
I'm not really sure this is release-worthy material quite yet. |
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| avengie |
| :D i sent the track to 4 strings lol he loved it..... hehehe since he is already helping me with a release, im not gonna ask him hehehe... he just told me that it needs more techy sounds... :D and it was very good....;) |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Well if getting signed is all you care about just send it to any digital label. |
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| avengie |
| Well, i was wondering why only you have a different opinion than all the other ppl i showed it to.... they loved it... and you dont seem to like it... so i guess its not your taste is it? Then i can understand.... i have couple labels i can release this on but i need a little bigger one you know? because those labels told me to... so dont think that i just care about getting it signed... i know its damn good.... |
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| Gusarin |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Listening to it as I go along...
The kick doesn't sound right, it's too sharp.
The percussions are very lacking, they don't create any movement to the track. This might be because of the synths being too loud compared to the bass. Also, the bell-like synth in the last part doesn't sound right at all - it almost sounded off key there but I can't be certain...
I'm not really sure this is release-worthy material quite yet. |
Jzs, can you hear yourself what u saying? :eyes: "kick dosent sound right" - the kick and bass are in balanced - and about not being too sharp - well the sharpness" of the bassline is important with the bmp of the track, and in this case the bpm and bassline are good too go!
Synths are not too loud, beacose the pads are in the front as much that they cover the synths good enough with high sounds too complete the whole balance! and about that off key" thing im not gonna say anything cause its absurd. Maybe people who dont like that kinda syle of trance dont post comments wich are not credible enough for that. Sammy, The track is good and release material hehe ! Congrats its deserves big!:stongue: |
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| jaggalo |
| quote: | Originally posted by avengie
Well, i was wondering why only you have a different opinion than all the other ppl i showed it to.... they loved it... and you dont seem to like it... so i guess its not your taste is it? Then i can understand.... i have couple labels i can release this on but i need a little bigger one you know? because those labels told me to... so dont think that i just care about getting it signed... i know its damn good.... |
little wierdo .. why you ask then to help you ? |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by Gusarin
Jzs, can you hear yourself what u saying? |
Yes, can you?
| quote: | | Well, i was wondering why only you have a different opinion than all the other ppl i showed it to.... they loved it... and you dont seem to like it... so i guess its not your taste is it? Then i can understand.... |
Well if you are already getting the feedback you need you can just ignore my comments. It's your track after all. |
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| ASFSE |
so i had to check this out cuz of the drama in the thread
i dont listen to trance btw, so outsiders opinion:
i think it's pretty good, but after the build up...i dont feel like there is anything to keep me grounded...that's the best way i can explain it...almost as if it's cluttery...too many things going on.
and there is one sour note in the bell part lol...i duno, sounds really obvious to me...
so, im not gonna say whether or not i think it's release worthy , cuz i duno what trance is like these days...but it just needs to be polished...imoooooooo..... |
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| Speactra |
Something sounds weird with the balance between the kick and bassline. For me the bassline needs more work, maybe eq and change the compressor. It sounds like you want the bassline to be punchier that it is.
I agree with Mystery about that the elements sounds like their on top of each other, not blended. And it sounds pretty empty, definitly needs more earcandy to spice it up. The little bit of the breakdown, that you havent cut away, sounds very boring, sounds like it's nothing that happends.
It's not a bad track, but it lacks something.
Haha, and in the the end! at 3:53 and 4:06 one note of the piano goes totally wrong! Fix that! ;)
I dont think this is releasematerial just yet either. It's not a bad track but just need some more work imo!
//Alexander |
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| avengie |
| LOL i didnt want to fight over it.... but sorry if i said something wrong.... i was just lookin for some good homes for this track thats it....:D |
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| gr8ape |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Listening to it as I go along...
The kick doesn't sound right, it's too sharp.
The percussions are very lacking, they don't create any movement to the track. I think the main synths are too loud in the mix. In general, the mixdown sounds a bit weird - it's as if the different elements sit "on top" of each other rather than blend in to a complete tune. I can't quite explain it. This might be because of the synths being too loud compared to the bass. Also, the bell-like synth in the last part doesn't sound right at all - it almost sounded off key there but I can't be certain...
I'm not really sure this is release-worthy material quite yet. |
Oooooh buuuurn
sorry :(
But seriously, im listening to the track right now, the bass sounds soft and bubbly. There are issues on individual instruments you should fix to get them to sit in the mix better and give them their own sound and power. But dont despair, the more work you put in, the more youll get out of it. Keep it up i hope this thread has just motivated you to work harder |
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