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a pre-beta.mp3 by me... please check (3.5mb) DD
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| Dj_Andrew_K |
I would like your comments on a track I am currently trying to produce...
The link : http://www.aweb.gr/pre-beta.mp3
I would like your comments and suggestions...
How about the layer @ 2:50 ? Sounds strange... I am not very keen on it anyway :P
It is only the first 4 mins of the track... The rest is still not done |
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| Dj_Andrew_K |
no comments yet? :( :( :(
come on TAs... please... |
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| bumbum |
| not bad. need more production |
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| TranceMasterUk |
ok when it starts, with that noise, its very vert annoying man
add some more percussion or something, use a better kick also
it goes on for nearly 2 mins sounding exactly the same
the synths that come in are too weak
and the notes are off aswell
sorry man
i didnt like this at all
its really bad IMO
hope u can take bad feedback aswell as good feedback man
peace |
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| Dj_Andrew_K |
bad feedback is important to improve myself :)
keep on telling me your comments... |
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| DJ Chrono |
| I agree with more precussion.. I recommend lots of hi hats and stuff. Plus, the arpeggio'd tune is pretty repetitve.. it doesnt really change from when It comes in. And this results in not having a real melody to go along with the arp. Sounds alittle more old school technoish than trance to me. dunno if you were going for this or what. |
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| Dj_Andrew_K |
I wasn't supposed to create a trance track...
I am more into a tech-progressive one... |
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