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[nxx][ethereal_stardust][nrg_trance][320kbps][137bpm]
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| [nxx] |
8) hi guys! hows it going with you, heres a track done
[ethereal_stardust]
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| smakmagik |
hey,
listening to it..
nice smooth dreamy sort of beginning
background synth is really nice...but the main tune is a bit...tiny bit screechy (not sure thats the right word)...
nice hats, they fit in perfectly
there was sudden silence at the 1:44 mark.. or did you intend it that way just to showcase different parts of the song?
the break is nice nice...sweeping pads at a lot of atmosphere.
this is something maybe mr.mystery would probably appreciate, since mellow-ish trance of this sort is not what i listen to too much, but production wise, its not a bad effort
keep it up
cheers |
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| [nxx] |
8) hi smakmagik, thanks for listening, glad you liked it 8)
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| azndragon0613 |
| I like the bellish sounds in the beginning. There's weird dissonance in the beginning. It repeats but the first occurrence is at 0:26. The background harmony does not match the upfront one. Everything else is fine. Good dream trance. Just a tad bit happy for me though but that's personal taste. Good work! |
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| [nxx] |
8) hi azndragon0613, thanks for the comments.
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| DJ Patski |
| Check ya pm's nxx! |
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| Glengie |
Everything fits, thats a big plus...
Its flows very well, the synth is all so big....
pause?
the build is good, very good.
I cant really criticize this, it fits very well although a little more movement, a extra halfstep here and there might fill out the adventure a little more.
critique mine if you like! (check sig!) |
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| pho mo |
That really lush ethereal melody that sounds almost like bells is so nice, but it's so high it gets lost a bit in the mix with the bright pads. It might lose some of that ethereal quality if it's played down an octave so could be challenge changing it down.
Other than that it sounds really good, the breakdown is really nice and the song takes you on a journey so awesome work :) |
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| kitphillips |
| Second segment is better, but I find the whole thing a bit busy in the pads department. The highs are just overwhelming. The melody is good though. I do feel there was some dissonance at the beginning. Overall not a bad effort. |
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| [nxx] |
8) hi DJ Patski, Glengie, pho mo, kitphillips, thanks for listening 8)
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| Rinster |
very dreamy tune. i like the pad work in this. the bellish sounds are nice to. i remember when you first posted here.. you have improved a lot man! nice breakdown.. maybe a more "Progressive" bassline after the breakdown? just a suggestion;)
good work.
Rinster.:) |
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| [nxx] |
8) hi Rinster! hows it going, glad you liked. yes i remember the first track post8) meanwhile take care
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