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NDi - Another Sky [trance]
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| NDi |
Hi!
I'm new to this forum but I'll start with a bang ;). Here is my latest take on trance.
Another Sky
Comments are always appreciated :) |
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| Glengie |
...yeah, this simply builds perfectly, haha. where are the glowsticks?!
wanna critique mine? check sig! |
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| thoughtlessjex |
That's a neat bassline there.
I like the subtle acid elements.
Damn, this build just keeps going. This is incredible.
I feel like there's a bit of mud in the high range. Maybe too much reverb on the hats?
Nice track. I really liked the drive. |
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| NDi |
| Thanks for the comments :). For the muddy part, you might be correct. I have a bad habit of using loads of effects and stuff for my tracks and sometimes it goes over the top. Also my equalizing skills are not completely there yet. Working on both issues though :) |
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| kitphillips |
Whoah thats a cool bassline! It would get me on a dancefloor real quick! The acid parts are really very nice too, a like the way the progression is nice and up front, but I would make a more interesting hi hat pattern personally, vary it every few bars at the beginning here and it'll have even more energy IMO.
I also think the highs are too busy, changing the pad to something more rich sounding would fix the problem. Seperation between the acid sounds and the pad would be desirable. The song is very well written though, possibly will need another element, but you'll only know once you adjust the highs a bit.
The breakdown is nice, I like the way you've lowpassed the percussion and fade it in slowly. The reversed elements there are great too, very nice work. The balance in this part of the track is far better.
You're certainly starting with a bang, this is a top tune;) I really think its got great potential, so keep it up! |
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| pho mo |
| Immediately the bassline and groove gets me into this, then the pads, and the goa line. Intro is wicked! Then the rising arp, then the falling arp line. Man! It's awesome. Then the arp again, then everything else. Just awesome, it's a wicked tune and unfortunately I've got no constructive criticism because I think this tune just hits it right on the head and delivers, no ifs, not buts. Awesome work! |
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| Frost-RAVEN |
Those hats sound really good. The clap has this tail to it I dont like though, still it gets the point across. The other elements are pretty solid. The synths are workin well. Because those synths are so massive you are losing other elements in the mix...Though trance does that a lot, so its not a bad thing...I just sometimes like it when each parts gets equal spaceing in a mix.
It's pretty good still.
That build up was awesome btw. |
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| NDi |
Wow, thanks again for the nice comments.
This track could use some tweaking still but I have already moved on to other projects. Maybe someday I'll "finish" this one :) |
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