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HI! Im new here, couple of tracks for you to listen to :)
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| Fractureduk |
Hi all!
Just joined here, really good community youve got here, lots of very talented producers and djs aswell. Glad to be a part of it now!
If you can spare any time I've uploaded a couple of recent tunes to soundclick, any feedback would b greatly appreciated.
They are both chilled out breaks, although beauty has a bit of a twist to it.
Beauty: http://www.soundclick.com/player/si...id=5727718&q=hi
Waves:http://www.soundclick.com/player/si...id=5727759&q=hi
www.soundclick.com/fractureduk if u fancy checkin out my page.
Hope u enjoy, let me know your thoughts
thanks all
Paul
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| Rinster |
hey mate i think the piano in "waves" sound a bit harsh.. maybe tune them down a bit.. it sounds nice however i think your tune could use more variation of fx's aswell as pad and bass work.. it still kind of sound unfinished.. maybe you can use the piano notes in a synthesizer to have it play along? cool melody though. would love to hear what kind of magic you can work on this.;)
cheers.
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| Fractureduk |
cheers mate, definetely noted :). Yer its not quite finished that 1, its just a first draft, trying to get some feedback to see where i need to go with it.
Thanks mate
Paul
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| Akia |
Hey Paul! Your tracks sounds interesting but they need more works, still sounds a bit empty and would do with some more variation. A good start however, keep working! :)
Takere!
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| Fractureduk |
kool yer, still sme work needed it agree mate, early days :).
thanks
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