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[music to do the robot to] Mezzir - The Approach
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| mezzir |
New song!
Again, I really dunno what genre you'd call this. It's 114bpm, but definitely upbeat. And gated flutes and cellos!
listen --> leave feedback
you know the drill
edit2: new version with more guitars!
and i figured out the genre, or as close as i'm gonna come |
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| mezzir |
k updated version
give a listen? |
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| ASFSE |
| hey frodo baggins, hey samwise ... sorry it reminds me of lotr, lotr remix... |
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| BTG |
I think you need to turn down the main bass line a bit, and tighten things up, kinda messy at parts. The guitar solo dealie is really cool, and you should bring that out more in the mix...
good stuff though, just some constructive criticism. |
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| phyrrus |
good track. I like how the gate drops on your cello like that. you've got a classical scale going on, which is why it sounds like LOTR at the beginning, hah. it works though.
your kick needs to be a LOT louder. compress the out of it or get a new one. turn down all the gates and arps and turn up the percussion, because electro is all about the beat. very original, almost daft punk sounding. |
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| mezzir |
| quote: | Originally posted by phyrrus
good track. I like how the gate drops on your cello like that. you've got a classical scale going on, which is why it sounds like LOTR at the beginning, hah. it works though.
your kick needs to be a LOT louder. compress the out of it or get a new one. turn down all the gates and arps and turn up the percussion, because electro is all about the beat. very original, almost daft punk sounding. |
thanks dude, and what you said was echoing what i was thinking
changes were made, and i give you the latest version, check the OP |
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