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[Uplifting Trance] Sterilis - Last Chance ''first track in a few months ;-)''
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| sterilis |
this is my first track in 4 months. took me a while to get back into producing when i returned from ibiza as i forgot alot stuff in production.
let me know your opinions on this one as i cant judge myself at the minute :D
Artist: Sterilis
Title: Last Chance
Style: Uplifting Trance
BPM: 140
MYSPACE
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| Sunclyder |
:) heey!!
your track is not finished...
is good idea, but after whole... not energy..
maybe you must add a fx, change samples..
best wishes
i invite you to comment Energy Reflect vs. Arctic Moon - Cold Planet rmx :-)
Sunclyder & T-RAVEL
-- united minds --
greetzky |
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| 3F05Q |
I like the overall direction of the track, definately!
The lead is a bit harsh in comparison to everything else, however. By that I mean it seems to be dry in comparison to everything else and therefore doesn't fit into the mix for me. Perhaps some filter movement on it to make it less repetitious.
Diggin' the beats man! |
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| sterilis |
thanks for the comments
the track isnt finished still have to sort out the breakdown and the part coming out of it. was hoping for some help with that ;)
what lead sounds harsh?
cheers |
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| Subtle |
4 months.. thats alot ^^
Some harsh plucks u got there.. gets a bit too much, nice drive in the track.. i like the melody after the break.. and i think it comes together nicely. |
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| Rinster |
man youve improved a lot.. loving this!! especially that "creepy ghost fx" on the background.. maybe turn up the volume of your pads a bit more.. and maybe a sencond arp when the melody comes in? just a suggestion.. Qlimax is very cool maybe it could have been introduced a bit different though..
cool tune man, your getting a lot better.. and i really mean that. ;) |
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| G. Cazali |
ok...
at the start i think it should be more friendlymix...
the main melody.... the notes are good, but the synth i really dont like it, or meabe try longer notes.
the bassline ok good, but i think you should try something new, thats the bassline i hear in every uplifting tune
i really dont like uplifting trance, but your track its pretty good, with a little more work on it, you should send it to some labels.
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| 3F05Q |
harsh was a bad word to use... but the pluck/short-note-duration lead. It stands out a bit too much. Melody is fine, but it could use some reverb and/or stereo delay.
Guess it's the one that is present during hte first half of the track. |
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| sterilis |
| quote: | Originally posted by G. Cazali
ok...
at the start i think it should be more friendlymix... |
its a sample not the full track ;)
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the main melody.... the notes are good, but the synth i really dont like it, or meabe try longer notes.
the bassline ok good, but i think you should try something new, thats the bassline i hear in every uplifting tune
i really dont like uplifting trance, but your track its pretty good, with a little more work on it, you should send it to some labels.
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thats the type of bassline that suits the label im signed to. thanks for the review though.
| quote: | Originally posted by Rinster
man youve improved a lot.. loving this!! especially that "creepy ghost fx" on the background.. maybe turn up the volume of your pads a bit more.. and maybe a sencond arp when the melody comes in? just a suggestion.. Qlimax is very cool maybe it could have been introduced a bit different though..
cool tune man, your getting a lot better.. and i really mean that.
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thanks for the review mate. yea i have to work on the climax, not too keen on it myself. |
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| Equos |
Great track, loving the atmosphere and all the details you've added. Agree about the climax build-up but otherwise a solid job. Nice work!
Equos |
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| Nery |
Yeah, it's a nice track :-), lovin' the atmosphere.
Keep up the good job mate;) |
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| sterilis |
| thanks for the reviews guys !! |
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