|
Sound of Goodbye
|
View this Thread in Original format
| DJDav0 |
Well I started this track on Friday and i think its almost finished. was looking to get opinions on it and this was the 1st place I thought of.
[[ LINK REMOVED ]]
DJ Dav0 vs Perpetuous Dreamer - Sound of Goodbye.mp3
Comments welcome :D |
|
|
| G. Cazali |
to much reverb men!!!!!
the vocals fit pretty good to the track, melodys, bassline etc.
its really not my style, for me you should download the speed of the track, about 130 bpms meaby, but thats just my opinion |
|
|
| Leon Oziel |
| hard!! cool but not my style... I keep on hearing that stab sample from Barthezz - On The Move |
|
|
| Leon Oziel |
| to much reverb make your time! |
|
|
| mark_gg_daniels |
hey man - great kick, and snare builds -hard and fast
loving the bass,
some peoples feedback is so rubbish, how can it help a proucer to say 'its not really my style' lol - :rolleyes:
a suggestion (which i seem to make for everyone, maybe its just me) but i love open hats in dance, and i think you got space for some hear.
in the breakdown, i think the melody is not loud enough - but thats easily rectified.
ar man - sweet breakdown, had to crank it up, loving the use of filters - another minor suggestion is the main 'appregiated' lead (if thats what you call it) could be more 'powerful' - hard to explain, but me personally love it when the main hook is really screaming at you, so when the breakdown goes into the beat you really are flippin raving and going crazy (hope that makes sense)
so for me (and im no expert, just know what i like)
1.more percussion, open hats etc...
2. more screaming hook in breakdown - and louder.
3. less use of using same vocal
but seriously this is awesome - just had my neighbours bangin on the walls,
also loving the ending bit, where you repeat the last hook for final time -
and whats everyone talking about reverb for? what u guys talking about? |
|
|
| DJDav0 |
thanks for the good and honest feedback mark_gg_daniels. thats what i was hoping for in posting my track on here.
I also love open hi-hats and know i should of put a stronger hat as is does seem to lack that extra bit.
In alot of my older tracks I found that I had the volume of my percussion to high and it was drowing out the bass kick and melody, so in this track i decided to have them a bit lower and give the other sounds more room in the mix.
I did hammer the vocal a bit to much in the song, ive just built a new pc and it can actually handle accapella's as my other pc was just ****!!. running a IntelCore2 Duo CPU 3.00GHz and 2gig of ram now in my new pc and it can handle vocals and alot more VST's in the tracks without any sound lag!
I just getting used to my new VST (Nexus) and still fingering out how to edit the presets to give them more ooomph. i loved the main lead sound but it does lack a bit of power.
overall i am still happy with the track, a big improvement on my style as a whole and alot of my freinds are inlove with the track allready. I only done this track as i got addicted to the vocals as soon as i heard them and found the original vid on you tube so decided to remix it.
thanks again for the time and effort to listen to and give me pointers about the track.
ill PM you my email if you want to msn and we could discuss the next track in the pipeline that i started 2nite.
Dav0 |
|
|
|
|
