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| Khayat |
Hey everyone this is my first project its juts a 3 min sample and I need some comments please on the structure itself not the mixing mastering etc.As I said b4 Im new to producing so I dont know if this is good or not so im relying on ur comments
I like this track (4 my experience its a big step forward) so Ineed ur comments to complete it
thank you all
PS:(something is missing in this track dont know what it needs a melody or sound here and and an effect there )
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| canadian didjer |
hey there how are you?
bleh... here goes ;)
You've got alot setup here... this is pretty kickin. the bassline, although nice, could be maybe deeper (ie: boost the <90Hz on the EQ). this is your first? nice... mine really sucked.
there honestly isn't alot to say here.... it's very nice for a first track posted. you must have had experience with other music first, is there any? |
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| Khayat |
hehehe
Well some Hipop some Rock etc but this is my first completed track I mean the first project that looked like a track not just some kicks and some claps heehee |
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| canadian didjer |
| that sounded really nice. I'm guessing it came from the rock influence :P |
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| Khayat |
| thank u dear im really motivated now to continuo |
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| mark_gg_daniels |
hey man - this is fukin wiked for a first time, you should hear my earliest stuff - my god its terrible.
honestly, if this is early stuff than you got an amazing future ahead of you.
Really advanced techniques youre using such as the drum rolls, and the reverse cymbals into the breakdowns etc.... love the brakdown, great way it comes out of the brakedown, with those teasing kicks, than the drum roll.
suggestion would be to automate the filters so the main melodys 'rise' into a banging crescendo (that all trancers love) - but of course these are only suggestions, and everyone is different.
what software you using to make this? |
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| PDM |
| quote: | Originally posted by Khayat
Hey everyone this is my first project its juts a 3 min sample and I need some comments please on the structure itself not the mixing mastering etc.As I said b4 Im new to producing so I dont know if this is good or not so im relying on ur comments
I like this track (4 my experience its a big step forward) so Ineed ur comments to complete it
thank you all
PS:(something is missing in this track dont know what it needs a melody or sound here and and an effect there )
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Hey mate, can you upload to sendspace? right clicking is not working here, and left clicking downloads it automatically to the music player, and I got no speakers here. :( |
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| Leniu |
| very nice for a first song, i tihnk u need a louder kick and snare as well as more (or louder) hats |
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| DJ Blitzkrieg |
| Haha, I seriously doubt this is your first song. I can definitely tell you have some experience. I love the drum roll in your beat. Sounds great, IMO. A little critique though. Your chords at the end are too simple in their rhythm. Try to work towards something a little more catchy. Other than that you got a good sense for percs. |
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| Khayat |
hehehehe I Swear its the first completed track :D Some TA users know this cauz the people who help me here are allot (Thank you all)
Anyways i got ableton live & in Mai 07
The software is Ableton live
My keyboard is Roland Sh 201
As u can see all I dont have any musical experience Im doing some music theory right now (U can see this from the melodies so simple but some people told me this is trance and thats ow it should be)
Dont know I left the comments to you and THANK you all for ahving time to hear the sample I will up again
Thnksss:D :D |
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| Khayat |
Paaaalm !!!!!!
Thanks maaaaan:o ;) :D |
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| Khayat |
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