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New Track....House/Trance
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| moodshaper |
Hello all you mighty producers! :)
I was wondering if you could give me some ideas how to improve this track to make it good enough for a label...
It's not exactly trance but this is my favorite forum so please forgive me!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5828715
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| Tinto |
It's not my style, but I can assure that you have done a pretty good track ;)
I don't have anything in mind to suggest you (the track is just OK for me). Well done job :)
Cya,
- Tinto |
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| mark_gg_daniels |
hey - great intro, like the vocals. Great bass, like piano melody thingy.
as said before, very good as it is - trying to think of suggestions!!!! would be great club house tune.
sorry for rubbish feedback, as in no suggestions really!!!
but good luck with it, hopefully some others will have more feedback |
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| 3F05Q |
One thing that caught my ear: seems to be a bit of distortion on the vocals that gets a little resonant at times. It's a bit shrill on the ears. Could just be me though, or perhaps the quality of the player.
Vocal layering is great. EQing is great. Transitions keep the track going and staying fresh.
I think the kick is getting covered up by the bass at certain points. The kick is quite deep along with the lower frequencies of the square wave. I can't help but think that a kick with a bit more initial hit would cut through better, and maybe a bit of sidechain compression. NOT to the extent to make the track pump, but just a bit to give some room for the kick when it hits.
I implore you to do a club/dance version as well. You know, longer periods of kick and less of the small breakdowns. BUT, keep those transitions in there.
Fantastic stuff moodshaper! And I think it fits the forum just fine. |
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| moodshaper |
| Thank you for the feedback guys!! |
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| Fait |
The vocals and sounds are really great, I think the percs are a bit bland though.
and I think a sidechained bassline would do wonders for this track.
my 2 cents :)
keep it up! |
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