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[Pure Techno] Rinster - Your Mine (Original Mix) - [Full 320Kbps]
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| Rinster |
hey guys, its been a while since ive composed my "own" track.. ive been remixing a lot lately.. anyway this tune was made for a special girl..:D
and she absolutly loved it !! which is a good thing haha
hope you all like it! and feedback on your opinions would be really appreciated.
thanks all & keep it real,
Rinster.
Rinster - Your Mine (Original Mix) - (Full 320Kbps)
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| B_man |
Sweet rythmic mayhem! I don't listen to much techno, but I am learning to appreciate it slowely.
Your piece has some phat hats, albeit a bassline that is somewhat trancy! Techno not having an off-beat bassline is more an exception than a rule, so I'll not nit-pick there.
All in all, it's a spaz-tastic production with acid twerks and beakers that seem both hard as nails and also carrying that robotic groove dominate in techno. The reso-synth riff was definately elevated when the last pad dominated the piece.
Keep up the good work. |
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| trancenation82 |
Nice track man, I like the undertones and the transitions. Was bobbing away listening to it.
You should start to compile a album...you're starting to have enough tracks for it and the quality is certainly right.
TN |
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| gwrmarines |
Check your PM's!:whip:
This is friggin good mate and im not too big on techno. Let me get that pack and i'll Crossland it lulz!:) |
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| epdarks |
| Title should be "You're Mine" Unless you are taking about a Mine is in the underground exploding device, which I doubt you are. |
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| G. Cazali |
mr rinster :)
lets chek your track......... |
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| G. Cazali |
dont like that bassline (i think the synth its the main problem)
percs are really good
some nice fxs you got here
not my fav from you
hope u can chek my track, sky high :)
cya |
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| sterilis |
the bass is too boomy. need to high pass that rumble out.
i see your fond of the vengeance vec loops in this
first melody comes in but that bass is too overpowering to concentrate on it.
like the ideas you have floating about in it but sort the bass out for my sake :tongue2 |
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| Fait |
Really good percs, though i'm not a fan of the bassline.
Keep it up man :) |
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| Beat Blog |
Not trying to be nasty, but I thought this was quite amateurish; I was surprised after seeing all the good comments.
I didn't find the melodies engaging at all, thought they were quite simple, and though it's a matter of opinion, I didn't like any of the synths much.
Agree with the others though, the percs are ace, though I think they could use some more mid, they are quite swishy and don't have much depth.
Finally, I wouldn't call this techno at all. A least not in the detroit sense. Hard techno perhaps (as differentiated from hardcore techno/gabba)? |
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| Rinster |
| quote: | Originally posted by B_man
Sweet rythmic mayhem! I don't listen to much techno, but I am learning to appreciate it slowely.
Your piece has some phat hats, albeit a bassline that is somewhat trancy! Techno not having an off-beat bassline is more an exception than a rule, so I'll not nit-pick there.
All in all, it's a spaz-tastic production with acid twerks and beakers that seem both hard as nails and also carrying that robotic groove dominate in techno. The reso-synth riff was definately elevated when the last pad dominated the piece.
Keep up the good work. |
Sweet rythmic review !! thanks for the kind review. ive got to change the bassline just a little bit, glad you liked it mate! =)
| quote: | Originally posted by trancenation82
Nice track man, I like the undertones and the transitions. Was bobbing away listening to it.
You should start to compile a album...you're starting to have enough tracks for it and the quality is certainly right.
TN |
not a bad idea actually.. think i should do that.. =)
thanks mate,
| quote: | Originally posted by gwrmarines
Check your PM's!:whip:
This is friggin good mate and im not too big on techno. Let me get that pack and i'll Crossland it lulz!:) |
haha can't wait to hear the remix to see what you did with it... :clown:
good luck mate!!
| quote: | Originally posted by epdarks
Title should be "You're Mine" Unless you are taking about a Mine is in the underground exploding device, which I doubt you are. |
hm yeah.. but its alright the way it is..
thanks for the point out though.
| quote: | Originally posted by G. Cazali
dont like that bassline (i think the synth its the main problem)
percs are really good
some nice fxs you got here
not my fav from you
hope u can chek my track, sky high :)
cya |
im gonna work on the bassline, cheers for checking out my tune mate.
| quote: | Originally posted by sterilis
the bass is too boomy. need to high pass that rumble out.
i see your fond of the vengeance vec loops in this
first melody comes in but that bass is too overpowering to concentrate on it.
like the ideas you have floating about in it but sort the bass out for my sake :tongue2 |
like i said im gonna work on the bassline:) you got good ears my friend;) thanks for leaving a reply mate appreciate it! :)
| quote: | Originally posted by Fait
Really good percs, though i'm not a fan of the bassline.
Keep it up man :) |
cheeriooooo, yup yup gonna work on the bass, cheers man.
| quote: | Originally posted by Beat Blog
Not trying to be nasty, but I thought this was quite amateurish; I was surprised after seeing all the good comments.
I didn't find the melodies engaging at all, thought they were quite simple, and though it's a matter of opinion, I didn't like any of the synths much.
Agree with the others though, the percs are ace, though I think they could use some more mid, they are quite swishy and don't have much depth.
Finally, I wouldn't call this techno at all. A least not in the detroit sense. Hard techno perhaps (as differentiated from hardcore techno/gabba)? |
dont worry about it mate, each to their own;) thanks for being so kind to leave a post though! and ill keep your comments in mind!
Thanks all for leaving a reply!! ill review your tune when ill come back from work!! Thanks. :) |
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| Rinster |
Ive left a review to the following = Bman, G. Cazali & Fait.. i couldnt find a thread of the others.. if you post a tune remind me by pm to leave you some feedback, and ill return asap. :)
cheers,
Rinster. :) |
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