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Green Street - Maybe Tomorrow [Trance]
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| Nemesis44 |
Very nice sounding track. Nice uplifting feel to it.
Overall the production is pretty tight in my ears.
The one thing that gets me about the track a little is that the structure is a little odd. Especially in the beginning. Perhaps gets full on a little too quick. It's a questions of taste so not the worst thing in the world.
Might want to check out a few panning techniques too just to split the sounds up a little more.
Cheers
Nem |
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| Rinster |
i could straight tell for a fact that this is made in fruityloops right at the start.. i like the melody/pad.. the main leads are nicely mixed.. perfect amount of reverb etc.. the breakdown however is awesome, but maybe try and put some sub-bass pads in there to keep the tune in balance.. overall a awesome tune.. but the breakdown sounds a bit to thin to me.. im willing to remix this tune if your ok with that ofcourse! :) pm me..
keep up the good work.
Rinster. |
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| Antiseptic |
Thanks for your comments. =)
if someone else want to make remix of that i can give midi`s
it was made in Buzz Tracker at first =) but then re-edited in Cubase+FL Studio, but master is not very good, it needs some work. I cant use all the plugs i want because of 256 mb ram =) and poor CPU =))). |
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| Nightshift |
This is a very nice track i like where it takes me. Mixing is done pretty well. the overall track has a nice warm sound to it.
Honestly I would like to remix this it would be fun if u could upload the midis and sned me the link i'll try and make a remix you would love. jsut send me a pm man with some some contact info (AIM/MSN/Myspace) and i'll get right on it!
great track |
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| Antiseptic |
Thanks for comment.
I'll upload midi files after i get home from work ´=)
and send you pm with link. |
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| sterilis |
arrangement is strange as pointed out. thing some sounds just dont seem to fit. has a melodic emotional sound although the kick seems a little weak for me. it just hasnt got that thud.
sounds like some melodies from years ago also or its the sounds you use. system f sounding stuff and also lange.
like the sounding of it but its just lacking something.
keep it up! |
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| B_man |
I love this vibe. It's chill... and then it sounds more like the bassline goes into palm-mute in a rock-like progression of timbre.
However, I will say that I think the kick sounds a tad quiet when it goes full-on. The kick itself probably isn't that weak, but it is lacking a little mixing job with the rest of the elements. Nemesis put it well when he said that the structure is unorthadox -- nothing wrong with that, but I will admit that the chorus part seemed rather sudden. Good square synths -- it gives it more of a techy feel.
I like and dislike the main synth. It has a good saw-blade feel to it, but it also seems a little raspy in a harsher way that I personally don't have the greatest taste for. This is a personal opinion, and I believe others may disagree with me.
The breakdown was good, but it lacked that lower end.
THe hats also could use a little more work. They didn't have enough air for what I am used to.
For a poor CPU... you did a very admireable job. I always find a way to complain about my computer resources. |
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| Antiseptic |
| Thanks for your comments, iˇll try to work on it. ´=) |
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