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[Melodic] David Laine - Under water (Original Mix)
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[Alpha]Dave
Hey all!!
I've just finished a new track, it's called 'Under water'.
And as I recently finished it, I would love to hear
some opinions about it! :)

David Laine - Under water (Original Mix)
(It's the first track in the player.)

Cheers!! ;)
Reno
Hey man,
Awesome track. Great production work, melodies, arrangement. All round top performance. But then you've been doing this for a while right?
Dj Caine
Hi,

The melody is really awesome and my overall opinion is that I would like to hear it in a lot of sets, but the 1st 1,5 minutes could be a bit better for my taste. It sounded like late '90s to me and when the melody comes in there is too much original starwars feeling with the lasers :)
From around 2:30 it was just fantastic. Absolutely beautiful melody which I had to listen to a couple of times over and over again. :)

Thanks for sharing
iloop
yes, nice track- i enjoyed the listen.
[Alpha]Dave
Wow! Thanks alot for the kind comments Reno, Dj Caine & iLoop!! :) Glad y'all enjoyed it! :p Much appreciated!

@ Reno - Haha, yeah, a couple of years! ;)

@ Dj Caine - I understand your thoughts, but glad you liked it overall! :D

@ iLoop - Thanks mate!! :)
David Adams
Awesome track! I love the melody. The breakdowns are beautiful. Very good and professional sounding mix.

I'm definitely looking forward to hearing more.
Reno
Dude was wondering if you'd be prepared to give me some tips on my tracks? I have just purchased Reason 4 and created 2 tracks. Well 1 is 6mins complete. See thread "work in progress" or
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...9&forumid=74&s=

I kind of have the feeling that I'm on the right track but just not quite there yet. Your tracks sound like they could have been done by Tiesto or any pro. I want mine to sound like that!!

I've only ever created 5 tracks which are all available at those links but I think I've made a marked improvement with these latest tracks.

Anyway would appreciate some comments on my thread as your music is the style of music I'm aiming for...

cheers
Reno
:crazy:
[Alpha]Dave
quote:
Originally posted by Reno
Dude was wondering if you'd be prepared to give me some tips on my tracks? I have just purchased Reason 4 and created 2 tracks. Well 1 is 6mins complete. See thread "work in progress" or
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...9&forumid=74&s=

I kind of have the feeling that I'm on the right track but just not quite there yet. Your tracks sound like they could have been done by Tiesto or any pro. I want mine to sound like that!!

I've only ever created 5 tracks which are all available at those links but I think I've made a marked improvement with these latest tracks.

Anyway would appreciate some comments on my thread as your music is the style of music I'm aiming for...

cheers
Reno
:crazy:


Hey Reno! Yeah, I'll have a listen and give some feedback on your track when I get home from the studies later today!! :)


Btw, anyone else? ;)
expanded
Sound very standardish, but not bad in anyway.
Jimb0b
I liked it, but you use that lazer sample WAY too much, it seriously started to irritate me! lol

Keep it up!
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