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Need some advice on this track
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| michaelconway |
This is a track im working on right now, im thinking about cutting out the main melody all together and changing it to somthing else. I feel like the track starts out strong, but is lacking in the break down which diminishes the energy. It might be that I have been playing it over and over and over again lol. Any thoughts? Its alright if you think the whole thing is crap too btw.
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| cenik |
I think you've done a great job!
My only (uninformed) criticism is that the small break-down and build-up you have before the main break-down and build-up are too close together. You have a break-down and build-up (around 1:20), then the main song gets going for about twenty seconds, and then the second (main) break-down and build-up follow right after. Either do away with the first break-down and build-up or, alternatively, let the song play for a bit longer before introducing the second (main) break-down and build-up.
I don't know much at all about production so don't take what I say too seriously. I do, though, think you've got something special on your hands with this tune. |
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| michaelconway |
| quote: | Originally posted by cenik
I think you've done a great job!
My only (uninformed) criticism is that the small break-down and build-up you have before the main break-down and build-up are too close together. You have a break-down and build-up (around 1:20), then the main song gets going for about twenty seconds, and then the second (main) break-down and build-up follow right after. Either do away with the first break-down and build-up or, alternatively, let the song play for a bit longer before introducing the second (main) break-down and build-up.
I don't know much at all about production so don't take what I say too seriously. I do, though, think you've got something special on your hands with this tune. |
Great piece of advice you are actually right not on the money Id been listening to it for so long I started cutting out section cuz they sounded too long lol.
Edit: Just wanted to say thanks for listening! |
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