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Lunar Eclipse- Lunatica (demo) [Trance]
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| Lunar_Eclipse |
Hello everyone !
We are two fresh music producers,
here is our newest melodic/uplifting trance production, Lunatica:
TITLE: Lunar Eclipse- Lunatica (demo)
QUALITY: 224 kbps
LENGTH: 5:31
LINK:
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All we need is your feedback, so leave some comments please! We appreciate all of them ;)
Hope you enjoy!
luner eclipse |
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| Gimenez |
| I like this one a lot, nice job |
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| Lunar_Eclipse |
| Thank you :). Anyone else ? |
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| Elec |
| Nice track, I like it. |
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| cryophonik |
| Nice production work - the mix is clean. I really like the driving bass lines. Good use of atmosphere in the breakdown. Very nice! |
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| PDM |
You know, the idea of the breakdown is lovely, but those strings sound too thin. Don't be afraid of leaving the low frequencies of the strings intact in the breakdown, add some chorus or moderate flanger effect to add fatness to them.
Another way to fix this is to play a lower string at a lower volume.
The main melody is pretty, but unfortunately the way it sounds is outdated, it sounds like trance of back of the 90's, I'm not going to tear you apart on the aspect that it sounds commercial (others apply the term cheesy), because all types of music express the taste, feelings and and style of their composers, but if you wanna make some nice commercial stuff, hear some of today's standards and follow. ;)
Cheers |
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| ENZ83 |
| I like the way the bass changes under the melody later on in the track thats what gives it the good feeling.! |
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| Lunar_Eclipse |
| Thanks once again ! It is great to read some new opinions (and learn). I hope there will appear more of them ! Still waiting for your FEEDBACK guys ! |
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| hardbeats100 |
god complex nice sounds and reverb is outsanding. in at 2.50 and the brake sounds rushy and uplifting, its nice too soft for me but a lot of work has gone into it and it shows. it is refreshing though, like a cider on a hot day. good for you ace. beats mine hands down.
see how muchbetter than me you are.
http://hardstyle.moonfruit.com/ |
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| linkmage |
| quote: | Originally posted by PDM
You know, the idea of the breakdown is lovely, but those strings sound too thin. Don't be afraid of leaving the low frequencies of the strings intact in the breakdown, add some chorus or moderate flanger effect to add fatness to them.
Another way to fix this is to play a lower string at a lower volume.
The main melody is pretty, but unfortunately the way it sounds is outdated, it sounds like trance of back of the 90's, I'm not going to tear you apart on the aspect that it sounds commercial (others apply the term cheesy), because all types of music express the taste, feelings and and style of their composers, but if you wanna make some nice commercial stuff, hear some of today's standards and follow. ;)
Cheers |
+ for giving a soul for strings sometimes try putting Exciter as FX... It will give some really really god warmness.. Nice Fx's in the breakdown, maybe some harmonies are to fast changing ( sorry for my weird and broken speech). I think, what I disagree with PDM is that nowadays trance need that oldskulish feeling..
Also I see some percussive lack... because kick hat kickclap for all track isn't good sugestion. So try some filtering or something else. Sander van Doorn is genius for that.. Because your track drive is like 80 km/h all the track... you need places where you put acceleration and so on..
Thats my opninion
had pleasure to listen
linkmage aka moonbird
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| sm44 |
nice intro but agree another layer of percussion would beef it up a little
i really like the sweep you have used
i like the effects in the background, really adds to the ambience
yeah pads are really thin, gradually phatten them up to add to the build during the breakdown
really nice melody
i dont really like the bassline, it sounds really weak
but apart from that great track |
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