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Need a 2nd opinion on my track.
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| Deus |
Ello guys i'm pretty new to the forums tbh i may have posted before but nothing too major just thought i would introduce myself. I'm Alan i'm 18 years old & i've been making music for a lil around 2 years and im still obviously a long way away from creating something that could be considered half professional but my ambitions are clear.
I need a 2nd opinion on a project i am working on, i'm well aware of the lack of structure but i havent fully completed it, i'm open to as much critisism as you can offer.
The track is called Scyther.
http://www.myspace.com/everydaydjs
Let us know what you think.
Thanks in advance. |
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| PDM |
Hi mate, there is a lot of things to improve here, the intro idea is pretty cool, but you'll want to accompany that idea with other elements as pads, strings etc. Pretty much everything else needs presence. Kick drums needs to be compressed, other percussions equalized, the leads need a boost in brightness etc.
It is good that you have your ambitions clear, set goals for the near future, and leave your biggest ambition for the last.
One thing I can recommend, read the tutorials provided in this place, they are gold, it helped me a lot in the past, and helped many others.
Welcome aboard. |
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