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Hidden Temple - Commerse (unfinished) 192 bitrate Trance
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This is one of my tracks that I have made and is not finished. Please leave some comments, I do not get mad and flame or anything, I am just trying to get better everyday, and this is not one of my newer projects, I will post more at a later time.
http://www.box.net/shared/jna1v57y82 <---- this is the link, it will bring the song right up, you may download it, or it will stream, your choice. Thanks for listening :toocool: |
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| ENZ83 |
| sounding good so far. think the bass and kick needs to be a bit clearer! |
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| hardbeats100 |
| at first it span me, then i fell in love.this is my kined of stuff, a bit dirty a bit fast and anthemy. i like the synths in the brake, they pop out nicely when the last beat stops at the start of the brake. grate melodie, uplifting and rushy. this is one i would love to own for my set. just one thing though when it all gose off after the brake the kick and bass seem to die, good over all.:happy2: |
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| sm44 |
This track is banging
really nice percussion used throughout
nice intro
i just dont like that lfo effect you used, its just way to overused
love the epic supersaw, what synth u use to create it?
nice melody, i think the melody has to flow a little more, its a little jumpy, is it gated?? maybe reduce the gate a little
yeah kick and bass die a little after the break
i dont really like that 2nd lead sound, just something about the sound of it
overall really nice track |
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ENZ83 - I totally agree about the bass and the kick. I still need to process the sound and layer, I also agree with sm44, that there is something off in the lead for the main melody section. I like the melody but the sound needs to be tamed. I made the leads with Nexus. All drums are samples and I programmed all beats. I feel I need alot more work on melody's and harmony, so I am reading the tutorials in TranceaddicT and reading all the Computer Music magazines. Just trying to learn:D
And yo, Hardbeats100 - you can use my track anytime, well any of you, you can download it right from the link for Box.net:D
http://www.box.net/shared/jna1v57y82 |
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