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Jim Naylor -Bronte (Melodic Trance)
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| Shara |
Heya Jim-
The bass/synth that comes in @ 1:27 is what really made the track come to life for me.
I wish you could've done more with the two piano notes in the beginning...the piano sounds very real, great sound quality.
The new piano melody that comes in at 2:24 is a nice touch, mainly when the beat kicks in @ 2:53...it fits in nicely:) Kind of haunting...
What program do you use and is that you playing the keys?
Overall, good composition...each part follows each other very well! |
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| flextown |
Hiya, I like the melodies in this song, but it would be nice to hear a bit more of a main hook if you know what I mean. As in after the break down, it doesn't really get going again, it should.
Apart from that the melodies and ideas are cool.
Flextown |
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| djmij |
hey thanks for the feedback glad you like it,shara, the piano i used is a free one called 4front piano module, its got no settings on it but sounds pretty good to me!,www.yohng.com/piano.html
yeah flexton i didn't know what to do after the break so i kept it simple, rather than playing a big drum roll and then every thing together.........i'll mess with it some more! |
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| Mr Kre8 |
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Good instrument sound for synth stabs.
Like the bits of piano, as already mentioned, wish you'd used it more.
Bass riff is cool.
Like the evolving pad noises.
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Don't think the break built up much energy (maybe cos it's 3mins 30)
After the break there isn't enough change
Piano is a bit slack on one note (if you'd wanted a loose human feel then why only play it once?)
Good stuff. Health CD promo is mad on your myspace, took me a while to realise what was going on.
Cheers
-K |
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| elektronika |
| you have a nice melody but i think it need more emphasise , i love the pad sound u choose but in the middle of the breakdown it is too long for me . work more on it , try put some more atmosphere sound fx , i'm sure it will be a great breakdown moment cause u have a nice melody ! |
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| djmij |
Thanks for the feedback it's extremely usefull!!!!
You both said what i was thinking in the back of mind, i'm going to re-do the breakdown so it's shrter and kicks off again , and i'll fix the piano , i kinda liked the human sound to it (it's exactly as i payed it live) but you're right...it should be tighter!!!
and i'll add some more atmosphere in the background!
Yeah the I think the health stuff is a good idea! even if i say so myself, it's trance combined with personal training!
again thanks for the feedback
jjjjjjj!
Trance and exercise - personal training on your ipod - risehealth.com.au |
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| Lindo |
Hey there. Just checked out your track and here's what I think.
That bass really did kick off this track as some others said. The only real big problem to me here is I feel that wide synth pad playing during the breakdown is a bit too loud during the whole track or something. It's taking away from the power of the bassline.
The breakdown didn't really do it for me though. Could use some more fx sounds to liven up the atmosphere a bit. The track is simple, but lacking some more elements to really keep it moving in the right direction.
Overall pretty damn good track 6/10 |
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