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Never Happening (Chill Out)
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| Ra Noair |
hi. i'm again. In this Time i made a chill out track with piano... taht should be a trance track, but the melodie that i made dont works good under 135 bpm.. now its in 111 bpm and only 2 minutes long.
pleaso for feedback.. thx!
http://stage3.kilu.de/
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| cryophonik |
| Overall, a very nice piece - I especially like the melody. I also like the sound of the pad and the muted percussion adds a nice touch. However, I'm not crazy about the production - the piano and pad just don't seem to gel very well IMO - in other words, they don't sound like they're playing in the same space. Also, it's short and really left me wanting more because, as I mentioned above, it's a great piano melody. Do you have plans to do a longer version? |
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| B_man |
This is a good idea, but the execution leaves a three-headed track that should unite better. THe piano is a tad too sharp for the rest of the track -- it sticks out too much for a chillout tune unless some louder or sharper elements come into play.
Again, great call but the delivery could be better. |
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| Ra Noair |
| hi, thx for feedback.. in next time i make a longer mix with more sounds:) |
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