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[House] Rising - 192 Kbps Sample.
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| music2dance2 |
Hi guys,
Your feedback on this would be appreciated. It hasnt turned out how I 1st imagined. Changed direction a few times, and kept parts as I thought may as well experiment. Vocal wasnt intended either but thought I'd give a go. Does it fit?
Sample length: 4:25
Link: www.Djjustinallen.com/Rising.mp3
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| Zombie0729 |
ok here we go...
bassline sounds great on the kick :)
don't like the hard panning to the right, i understand the ride & wood block are on the left but the whitenoise ride or whatever it is on the right is too powerful. bring each a lil more center
piano! -- hi from 1997 :)
vocal totally fits on the piano -- i'd like to hear a few bars of it dry
not sure how i feel about the bass/low tom hit at 2:45.
i think either the lead (sound design wise) needs to be more interesting and needs more movement OR musically it needs more.
4:15, would of expected more of this sound when it broke out -- very mark knight and with a few minimal tech sounds on top you would have nailed it.
cool ideas justin, might be the start of the new toolroom knights compilation ;) |
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| music2dance2 |
| Thanks for the feedback mate. Ill prob go back and have a work around with the lead and percs. vocal was dry at one point but I changed it may put it back dry with the piano, then after the break fit in the tech sounds a bit. |
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| evo8 |
hey, realy like that kick, goes well with the rest of the percussion
you have a nice sorta squarish bass, then u have another subbass which i dont really like, also the new sound that comes in at 34 secs doesnt really fit imo
id keep the squarish sound, it adds a really nice feel to the track i think! |
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