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4am - Jaded (Ambient Trance)
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| 4am |
First song in over a year! May still need some work, but I'm just glad to have something to show for. It's short at only around 4 minutes. But that's on purpose. I don't really need the typical 'intros' and 'outros' for Trance since mine is not for the dance floor, but more for smoking a doob and contemplating life.
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=1098583&t=3698 (Streaming)
If you're an acidplanet member, leave a review there, please!
Peace,
Heather |
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| Vortex_SA |
awsome atmosphere! gr8 stuff man! i really liked the start of it all, just one thing, at 00:29 i think you close too much sounds, open a pad or something, the high leadish sound that kicks in at 00:59 needs some tweaking for my taste... the beats that kick in at 2:27 are really not my taste, too much ibiza house party style :) but all your atmosphere is so sweet, keep it up! i would have made a break before the drums and then insert a drilling beat that sounds like someone's grinding your head, but thats me...
enjoyed listening, expecting to hear your completed work... |
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| 4am |
| Thanks for the positive and constructive feedback. I've decided this one can be great... Just need to put more time into it. Other people are saying it ends abruptly, and I agree. I'll fix 'er up some time today |
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| 4am |
| Made some subtle changes but it sounds more final now. Peace |
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| Eldritch |
Hi. It's good to hear some new stuff from you.
Good atmosphere, great synth work. I kind of zoned out while listening to this. :D
The kick could use a bit more punch/snappiness in the high frequencies. |
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