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Rinster - Tropical Oasis (Original Mix) - [Summer Dance/Trance] *Full 320Kbps* (pg. 2)
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| Nemesis44 |
Nice track and I agree with the others for the most.
The track does sound very busy though and you do get kind of a cramped feel for everything.
I do have any issue with something that no one else has picked up on, perhaps I'm the only freak who hears it. You have issues with the bassline and the backing 'Pad' before the break down.
Giving it a listen, it's actually a chord change that sounds really gastly. It's one of the inbetween notes that only lasts for a short period but it's out of key.
The track itself has been crushed to death by either compression or limiting, either that or it's clipping, can't tell so easily due to bad headphones.
Mix down is also a bit muddy, a bit too much lower mid from the bass makes it loose some of it's sheen.
That said, it may seem like I hate the track and it's actually totally the opposite. I feel that your productions are really coming on and like what you are starting to put together.
Good job in terms of ideas and composition.
Cheers
Nem |
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| Rinster |
| quote: | Originally posted by Nemesis44
Nice track and I agree with the others for the most.
The track does sound very busy though and you do get kind of a cramped feel for everything.
I do have any issue with something that no one else has picked up on, perhaps I'm the only freak who hears it. You have issues with the bassline and the backing 'Pad' before the break down.
Giving it a listen, it's actually a chord change that sounds really gastly. It's one of the inbetween notes that only lasts for a short period but it's out of key.
The track itself has been crushed to death by either compression or limiting, either that or it's clipping, can't tell so easily due to bad headphones.
Mix down is also a bit muddy, a bit too much lower mid from the bass makes it loose some of it's sheen.
That said, it may seem like I hate the track and it's actually totally the opposite. I feel that your productions are really coming on and like what you are starting to put together.
Good job in terms of ideas and composition.
Cheers
Nem |
ill have a look at that key you mentioned that is out of key.. really havent noticed anything myself.. haha crushed to death.. i think its the bad earphones your listening with, nearly sure. ;) give it a proper listen on a good pair of headphones/speakers. glad you like it though, but really give it a listen on a proper system. and then let me know what you think. :) |
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| MrJiveBoJingles |
Nice track.
I think the mixdown sounds kind of distorted or muddy, and I'm not sure if I like the spoken word sample. You have some nice melodic content here, though, and I liked the use of the birds sample near the end.
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| DjAyTeKnOtRoNiC |
| That voice that says oasis is annoying. It doesnt fit in that great and the tune is much better without it. As others have said the mix is a little muddy you'll have to do some eqing on some of the sounds. |
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| Rinster |
| quote: | Originally posted by DjAyTeKnOtRoNiC
That voice that says oasis is annoying. It doesnt fit in that great and the tune is much better without it. As others have said the mix is a little muddy you'll have to do some eqing on some of the sounds. |
speaking about annoying voice samples.. did you make this tune? http://tranceaddict.com/forums/show...1&forumid=74&s= |
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| Kevin_Cheung |
I like it. It's pretty good.
But if this were my track I would do the following:
1) Play a wider range of notes on the bassline to follow the lead synth melody. Sometimes, half the time it's dissonant and out of tune with each other. Maybe that's just the style you're going for. But I don't think uplifting melodic Trance is supposed to be dissonant.
2) More variety. Very repetitive. Make better use of breakdowns and buildups to build more anticipation.
Check out my thread and leave some feedback please.
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...1&forumid=74&s= |
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| DjAyTeKnOtRoNiC |
| YES!:gsmile: |
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| DjAyTeKnOtRoNiC |
After listening to this voice sample i thought it could make a bangin' hard tekno choon. so i started a little remix for your listening pleasure.
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| Rinster |
| quote: | Originally posted by DjAyTeKnOtRoNiC
After listening to this voice sample i thought it could make a bangin' hard tekno choon. so i started a little remix for your listening pleasure.
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please tell me that is a joke.. |
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| DjAyTeKnOtRoNiC |
| quote: | Originally posted by Rinster
please tell me that is a joke.. |
WHAT!?!?!?!? YOU DON"T LIKE IT????????????????? :crazy: :tongue2 :crazy: :p :p :p :p |
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