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Explorers (Uplifting Retouch)
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| Lightworks |
i like the tune, good job! ;)
only thing is that the sound sometimes sounds a bit muffled... maybe the main lead is a bit too strong at points? i had my volume very low, and it came through quite loudly.
piano's are great, they're very dreamy and fit the track nicely. the vocals are ok, but it's almost impossible to hear what he is saying ;) it's nice for the atmosphere though, although it can't be understood.
good job, this is a nice melodic tune ;)
greetz,
LW |
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| attacc |
Thanks..
you're maybe right about the melody.. I'm gonna try to do something with it tomorrow |
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| dj dave b |
| ya, i agree with LW the main melody is too loud and drowns out the track, just work on the mastering and then you have a perfect track! :D |
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| mr. poopyhead |
again, great track, =P
that vocal sample is SOOO cool... but a little overpowering at 3:38.... but it fits in really well at around the 6:20 mark...
hehe... i think you should rename it.... uplifting retouch? make a really cool name ________ mix.... i dunno.... something to do with explorers.... =P
nice work... |
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| Haak |
Awesome track! Love the melody!
Very well produced, the main synth sounds great although it's a bit loud as said above.
Only thing I find a little weird is that the clap is on the 1st and 3rd beat as opposed to the 2nd and 4th.
Great job, keep it up! :D |
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| attacc |
| quote: | Originally posted by Haak
Only thing I find a little weird is that the clap is on the 1st and 3rd beat as opposed to the 2nd and 4th.
Great job, keep it up! :D |
Thanks man :D
Yeah, I'm gonna do something about the main synth today.
About the claps.. hehe, I've always put the clap on 1. and 3. .... only my house tunes have clap on 2. and 4. . Hmm.. does it really matter? :) :D |
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| attacc |
Thanks for listening to my tune guys.. it's really awsome to have some feedback from real trance lovers ;)
I'm fixing some of the stuff you guys pointed out right now.. the over pumping vocal .. the loudness of the melody..
it's weird sometimes.. you don't hear what's wrong until someone points it out..
Maybe I'll try to figure out a new name too.. I was kinda like the name Explorers.. and it is an uplifting retouch.. because the original Explorers song I made was more chill
Cheers! |
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| dj dave b |
well.. its not a bad thing .. its just that the 'clap' sound which can also be a snare in many other genres of music is pretty much a standard thing.. to hear it being used in a different timing can really throw you off the beat, its like trying to drive a car with the steering reversed!
that's my two cents. |
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| attacc |
ok.. hmm, maybe I should fix my clap then
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| attacc |
Hey,
I made an improved version of my song.. I lowered the main melody a good deal and the result was much better. you guys were right.. so right.... I also removed the vocal at the spot which mr. poopyhead suggested and I think it was an improvement
I owe you guys a great deal!
If you're interested you can listen to the result here.. the file is 7 megabytes
THE FILE!!
TA 4 evah :haha: |
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| dj dave b |
:D downloading it now
[EDIT] your clap is still on 1 and 3 !, its really throwing me off lol , it sounds like there is something wrong with the tune.. i think u should fix it :D[/EDIT] |
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