| Mayhem Master |
ok i fist thing that needs to change is that piano in the begging and those toms are not matching to the rest of the track at all. not to criticize because you probably worked really hard on this but there are quite allot of things on here i would completely change or remove. and this track could do with a key change and more of a sense of it leading somwhere else than just a minor melody change. do you have the file? i also have somthing i have worked to from this morning if u want to hear it and tell me what you think, i have used all the tips you gave me and turned it into something solid instead of just minor melodies and small drum loops.i will post the audio mixdown on my site (obviously i havent mixed it barley at all but u get the point).
will keep you posted. |
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