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original track "Bronze", 144 bpm, 7:07, 13MB download
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| inatrance |
| dude I'm checkin out, you got ignored |
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| inatrance |
very nice job.. with a huge build up, this would be a very emotional, uplifting tune :) very well made imo
it just kinda died when I was really getting into it ehm I think it was around 4:00.. if you got a bassline kickin, some sytnhs wailin, I know you know what I mean.. go all out psycho, omg Id love this song |
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| Mr.Mystery |
The synths were f**king awesome! I love them!!!
The only thing I think you should change is the drums... somehow they just don't sound "right", if you know what I mean.
Excellent piece of work anyway, keep it up!! :) |
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| Lightworks |
this is a nice tune you got there, great job on all the synths :)
although i would like one synth to really stand out though and make this track reminding to many people, as it sure has got that potential ;)
greetz,
LW |
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| delobbo |
Thanks for the feedback, something I've definitely noticed over the past few days of listening to this track is that it does need more synth parts, certain parts just sound dry, like something is missing. It needs a key synth part with high notes/chords, and I think then it will be lifted to a higher level. In terms of the drums, hmmm... I personally was happy with them, but I know there's always room for improvement. And yes I agree, it doesn't have a climactic buildup. Something I will also be working on.
Also - I did not have the chance to run it through some EQ like I normally do - well yesterday I did. Here is what I guess you could call a "remastered" version, which is much louder and crisper:
Delobbo - Bronze (remastered)
Surely for my next projects I will be aiming to creating a fuller soundscape and try to limit any dry areas. Thanks again for all the feedback, I was starting to wonder when nobody said anything. :)
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| inatrance |
| quote: | Originally posted by delobbo
Thanks for the feedback, something I've definitely noticed over the past few days of listening to this track is that it does need more synth parts, certain parts just sound dry, like something is missing. It needs a key synth part with high notes/chords, and I think then it will be lifted to a higher level. In terms of the drums, hmmm... I personally was happy with them, but I know there's always room for improvement. And yes I agree, it doesn't have a climactic buildup. Something I will also be working on.
Also - I did not have the chance to run it through some EQ like I normally do - well yesterday I did. Here is what I guess you could call a "remastered" version, which is much louder and crisper:
Delobbo - Bronze (remastered)
Surely for my next projects I will be aiming to creating a fuller soundscape and try to limit any dry areas. Thanks again for all the feedback, I was starting to wonder when nobody said anything. :)
delobbo |
i'm pickin it up, I like this track alot, what program/hardware do you use? jw |
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| delobbo |
I've only used one keyboard for this track (including a drumkit with samples), hmm should I tell you what it is? :) Next week I will be adding to my arsenal of tools, in the hopes of creating a more dynamic sound. In fact - the new machine is very similar to Akai MPC series of samplers/drum machines, so I'm hoping it will be able to carry the torch in the drum arena and single-handedly lift the sound to a level I haven't seen before. I want to end up with an Access Virus C by the end of the summer, we'll see.
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| delobbo |
Oh I forgot to mention - this track is meant to be played AS LOUD AS POSSIBLE!!!! :)
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| robstar |
Great track. Gives me a little Goa feeling but itīs still trance. :)
But I think thereīs to much reverb and that makes everything sound muddy.
Still itīs a great track!
Later:z. :) |
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| delobbo |
| quote: | Originally posted by robstar
Great track. Gives me a little Goa feeling but itīs still trance. :)
But I think thereīs to much reverb and that makes everything sound muddy.
Still itīs a great track!
Later:z. :) |
I know what you mean - yes I think I went a little overboard with the reverb. I'm going to turn it down... and send over v 2.0 ....... :)
THANKS for the feedback, I really appreciate it.
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