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'Moving On' [Dream Electro] {full 320kbps}
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| FromAbove |
Tell me is it a bad thing that I can produce really fast. Does it show in my work that I rush things. Let me know! I could prob make a full album in 1 week ;\
Moving On (8:34) |
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| Stereoid |
first of all - it's not my style, but in my opinion you should try make your music a bit slower. select your sounds and samples with prudence and everything will be good ;)
regards |
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| cybernetica |
| Not exactly my style, but it sounds pretty solid, good choice of sounds. For a full album, you need to spend a little more time on EQing things though, I feel like some stuff is clashing for space in the mix. The midrange strings are maybe a little too dominant. Personally, I think this track gets a little repetitive over time. Spend a little more time on transitions and variation. Good luck :) |
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| music2dance2 |
| agreed, you need to vary your arrangement mate you'll make much more interesting sounding tracks. Keep at it though. |
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| FromAbove |
Thanks everyone. I'm aware of the repetitiveness you speak of, and the reason why I did that was because I was thinking about how a track sounds at a club. They aren't 3 minutes long and the danceable parts last the longest, either because they are long to start with or the DJ loops it. So I figured why not have extended portions to give the track more body. But you are also right, in that I should have more variation in the parts that repeat :]
EQing is my biggest achilles heel. What sounds good yesterday sounds like bloody the next, which is a problem when I think a track is done in one single day. I gotta stop that! Actually, the next track I share I will make sure I have all these points covered so that I get only positive comments.
Cheers mate! |
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| G-Con |
This sounds much better than some of the earlier tracks you've posted on here so you are improving, no doubt about that :)
I like the bass, might need a bit more eq'ing but its got great groove to it.
The track itself is okay. Not enough about it to really grab me though and I agree with others that the arrangement is too repetitive.
I know what you mean about club tracks being long, but they will still have variations, and new elements coming and going to keep the listener interested.
I've noticed how quick you finish tracks by the amount you post on here. I would definately say to take your time. Once you have the basic layout of the track, then spend some time on the transitions from one part to the next. And don't just loop sections purely to stretch the track time. If it ends up being short, well so what. If it felt right to make it short then so be it. Better that than to loop parts over and over for the sake of it.
Anyway, this track is okay and you are definately improving. And overall, I'd say its good that you are able to produce so much and finish tracks. Better that than to be one of many who struggle to finish anything...
Keep it up! :) |
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| music2dance2 |
| I to noticed improvements so yeah keep at it. |
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| FromAbove |
| Sweet! Thanks you guys. Well one of the main things I need to get down as well is having the right groove. I want all my tracks to be dance club worthy in some sense. |
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| murka |
| I think this track would definetely not play well at a club,at its present condition or at least not any type of club i'd want to go to... sorry. |
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| murka |
| I think this track would definetely not play well at a club,at its present condition or at least not any type of club i'd want to go to... sorry. |
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