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It's Missing Something. Please Help. New Song
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| cbartelski |
I've been super busy with non music stuff lately, but I did manage to pump out a song.
It's a long club mix, so... It isn't really interesting till about a minute in.
Please let me know what y'all think.
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Chris. |
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| theartfulducker |
Hey ya tracks not bad. I think the kick could be much fatter and upfront if its ment for a club mix. Also i think it needs some sort of filtersweeping through it to give a bit more movement and empasis on certain parts. I guess your trying to go for that big airy sound there? Some hella big reverb would sound good IMO. Also sweeping white noise or airy pads quietly through it maybe? . Also sweeping noise up into the drops etc. :) The main drops not very creative either really you could do summat fancier there as its the penultimate moment of the track.
lol bit picky aint I but i hope its helpfull :) |
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| DJGonzo |
youre a good musician, however
1. the main lead is kind of... not good
2. you have a gate sublead that annoys me :P
as for the good points, i dont really need to tell you but
the beat is very good
the sound is very very good overall: consistent and leveled
i like the fx, ie. the stereo delay on lead
i think the melody itself is boring and even more boring :/
what can i say? make a new melody
i know this isnt what you want to hear, but this quality -
you can do much better |
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| cybernetica |
I dont really like the first melody. Also agree that the kick could stand out a bit more, maybe a boost around 60-80 hz would help.
2:45 is pretty nice. Good layering with the gated pad.
Nice "cold" pads and plucks during the breakdown, otherwise I think there could be a little more going on. It's an ok break but maybe you can add something to make it special.
5:20 nice transition to the main theme. The layering of melodies on this one is pretty good. The melodies themselves need maybe a little more attention, maybe some automation or more dynamics, to add a human touch.
Also I think that something about the percs is uninteresting, maybe a little variation in rythm? I dont know.
Well done overall though! |
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