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DJ Alfi - FingerBANG
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| dj_alfi |
Just finished this track that Ive been working on for 3 days now. All i got left to do is some minor tweaks that I need proper monitors to do.
Its a darkish kinda electrotech tune, very Swen Weber inspired..
http://dump.no/files/eb1c2f17897e/D..._FingerBANG.mp3
Feedback is as always apreciated :D
Enjoy |
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| dj_alfi |
| wow thanks for all the great feedback :toothless |
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| Gabriel Cazali |
hmm i really didnīt like the vocals =0/
the track its really well finished but....... didnīt like at all
sorry :$ (just a personal thing)
you really make a good job here, congrats |
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| Theran |
Hey Alfi, I really liked your track.
I really liked the heavy bass, this track sound like something i'd play in a set.
I have mixed feelings about the vocals, but I'll listen to it a couple of times more.
Keep it up! |
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| dj_alfi |
cheers :D
ive tried removing the vocals, but i couldnt come up with a new element that would work as well with the automation in the buildup.. |
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| Theran |
| quote: | Originally posted by dj_alfi
cheers :D
ive tried removing the vocals, but i couldnt come up with a new element that would work as well with the automation in the buildup.. |
Maybe you could try to automate the release on that bass, try to create a sort of 'flight 643' effect. |
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| adi_hanson |
mmm , reminds me of scouse house , maybe you wanna put a donk on it
but seriously , very well produced
Sorta the thing that you would hear on a TV program about gang culture.
Very dark,
Not something i would be into ,
but still impressed by your production skills
In all it seems something more aimed at the black youth side of things. |
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| SeanCronin |
| Thats a really great track mate. Love the bassline in it. I agree with the others that the vocal doesn't go well with the track. Well the rap bit. The "Bang" vox sounds pretty good. What if you tried a really long snare roll for the main break?? Just a suggestion but could give it a kind of Randy katana-In silence or Armani & Ghost airport kind of power to it. Although these tracks are Trance & Techno it could still sound mental with your track the way it builds up and the bass kicks in. |
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| SeanCronin |
| Sounds like something that would get signed to Doorn Records!! Should think about sending it to them. |
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| dj_alfi |
| quote: | Originally posted by SeanCronin
Thats a really great track mate. Love the bassline in it. I agree with the others that the vocal doesn't go well with the track. Well the rap bit. The "Bang" vox sounds pretty good. What if you tried a really long snare roll for the main break?? Just a suggestion but could give it a kind of Randy katana-In silence or Armani & Ghost airport kind of power to it. Although these tracks are Trance & Techno it could still sound mental with your track the way it builds up and the bass kicks in. |
thanks for the comment :D
the thing about the vocals is that during the breakdown, there are 7 parameters for the vocals that are automated, and i havent been able to find something to replace it with..
maybe ill have another go with the track when im done working on my ep. |
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| Beat Blog |
Haha, this is great.
Suits your "online personality" very well.
I like the vocal, but I think the break goes on way too long. |
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| Rinster |
| interesting tune, nice! :) only thing i think though its lacking is a bit more drive percussion wise, other then that good work! 7/10 |
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