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Discape - (first draft) {trance} 450kbps / no download , in player
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| adi_hanson |
Hi everyone , been working busy on 2 projects lately , and this is one of them.
This is a first draft and would like to see what you think of this track and what could be better.
Any feedback is accepted warmingly and lovingly , unless you slate it :crazy: .
Ultrastellar - Discape (first draft)
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cheers |
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| Gabriel Cazali |
whats up cow men!
lets se what you got here
the bassline its nice, meaby it starts to soon, you know , for the "friendly mix", its not 100% necesary that u make every track with the friendly mix but, just an observation =)
the melows starts
can u downem a lil bit? (volume)
because, with out the melows, the percs and bassline sounded pretty good, but the melows "EAT" pretty much everything XD
so a lil work on the mixdown its what i suggest you to make your track better =)
nice work , nice progress ;) |
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| adi_hanson |
hey , cheers , i started this tune 2 nights ago and finished the basis of it today , but im using my roland now and have got a bit exited like a kid because of that arp i made on its editor , so ill look at the volume , first pointer ,
cheers dude |
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| adi_hanson |
hi everyone , second draft is up after grabriels post (cheers) can anyone else pick anything out?
cheers |
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| airwalker1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by adi_hanson
hi everyone , second draft is up after grabriels post (cheers) can anyone else pick anything out?
cheers |
er would love to but there is no linke poo.:eek: or player |
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| adi_hanson |
| quote: | Originally posted by airwalker1
er would love to but there is no linke poo.:eek: |
See the first post , it now says second draft , which is the one after gab's suggestion :D
enjoy! |
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| moodshaper |
few thoughts I had:
-nice production
-intro is way too long for me. 40 seconds of cymbals with reverb?
-I like the bassline.
-don't like the synth that comes in at 5:00. It doesn't add anything interesting.
-I think this is one of those trance tracks that make club goers switch to house music. It's just a little too boring to dance to... However I save my judgment for the final version :) |
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| adi_hanson |
| quote: | Originally posted by moodshaper
few thoughts I had:
-nice production
-intro is way too long for me. 40 seconds of cymbals with reverb?
-I like the bassline.
-don't like the synth that comes in at 5:00. It doesn't add anything interesting.
-I think this is one of those trance tracks that make club goers switch to house music. It's just a little too boring to dance to... However I save my judgment for the final version :) |
Cheers:
As im learning all the time , it was a hihat sample , streched and as you say with added reverb for a bit of experimentation
The synth at 5 mins is actually the bassline several octaves higher , than at the beggining.
But its in its early days yet , |
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| airwalker1 |
| wasnt hearing any thing realy rong other than it was a little boring could use a bit of beefing up. try pading things out some more and may be find somethings to play with. all in all goood stuff:tongue2 |
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| covert23 |
| when i play it on my system it lacks bottom end power...im not sure if you have a sub base or not ? if you havnt id recomend that you buy one and amaze yourself with the difference it makes when mastering a track for real....if you have one then id recomend boosting the eq a little....add some effects and work on the arrangment and your doing good....keep up the good work...hope this helps.... |
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| Theran |
Hey Adi,
As I am listening on my laptop, I cannot give any advice on mixing. So I'll just go on the arrangement and elements.
- The intro hats have way to many reverb on it, you might want to lower that or sidechain those hats, you'll get a nice effect doing that.
- The clap sounds to dry, you could lower the volume of it (so it sits more in the mix), add a bit of reverb and flanger to it (to make it moving) and layer it with a snare drum (it'll be a lot tighter).
- It sound a bit repetitive, there isn't really something new or exciting in the track. You can change that by adding more high to the pluck you used (automating the Cutoff), A pad or atmospherical aspect could also spice this track up.
I think the production is pretty solid, but it isn't really exciting.
Good job! |
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