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2nd Draft - will kill for feedback
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| moodshaper |
Hey guys,
Here's 2nd draft of a new track 'Give me your love'
http://framedrop.com/moodshaper/
I wonder what you guys think about this. Do you think it would be good for clubs or is it still missing some key elements?
Also, I'm not sure if this is hard trance or progressive or maybe something else. Any ideas?
Bear in mind this is a work in progress. |
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| Gabriel Cazali |
armin van buuren - if you should go (inpetto rmx)
i just heard the same synth on your track XD
well i have to say, that am not a big fan of vocals, but yours are not that bad, i will remove the one that saids "YEAH"
the bassline its pretty gooooooood, its not the tipical bassline, great job
more elements and perclines will make your track better
but good job overall ;) |
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| Beatflux |
| quote: | Originally posted by Gabriel Cazali
armin van buuren - if you should go (inpetto rmx)
i just heard the same synth on your track XD
well i have to say, that am not a big fan of vocals, but yours are not that bad, i will remove the one that saids "YEAH"
the bassline its pretty gooooooood, its not the tipical bassline, great job
more elements and perclines will make your track better
but good job overall ;) |
The "yeah" vocal doesn't sound good. It's timbre doesn't fit the mood of the track. |
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| Theran |
The track sounds pretty good.
Maybe use some more FX sounds or atmosphere to get the track really moving, I personally don't like the vocals but the percussion lines combined with kick and bass sounds pretty tight.
Nice job! |
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| moodshaper |
Wow, thank you guys!
That's what I call a constructive feedback.
You're probably right about the 'yeah' sample. I put it there first and kinda lost objectivity after that...
I will try to add some more elements and fx to the whole thing.
Thanks again!
If anybody else has any feedback I'd love to hear it too.... |
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| muravei |
You can lose the other vocal stuff and do some nice things with that female whisper or what ever that is...using different decay time on the reverb and combing different delay steps, some nice panning etc.. ;)
the track itself sounds a bit empty to be honest..you are missing something..maybe some other stab layer in the back and some percs in order to fill it up a bit more...but yeah..I'm not really familiar with trance, so don't take my opinion seriosuly :) |
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| mehta |
I like the bassline. and the "yeah" but it makes the track much less serious, personally I can't take electronic music too seriously most of the time.
the melody and chords are pretty good too, but adding some more modding, maybe octaves or a harmony would help out a lot in a few sections. it's a bit too dry to be the huge banger that it seems like it should be?
good job though, keep rockin |
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