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TA Creative Writing Competition!!
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| DJ Sunburn |
Hey everybody! Who wants to start a writing competition? If you would finish a short story 1,500-10,000 words that begins with this paragraph:
A dash of green light surrounded her body, creating a dark silhouette where her body stood. The green light faded away, revealing hundreds of people dancing to the rhythmatic beat that forced their bodies to move uncontrollably. She began moving down the stairs where they were and touched her poclet where the pistol still stayed safely secure. Several male dancers with red blood shot eyes began approaching her to dance but she just pushed them away. She knew what she had to do.
There needs to be 15 people who agree to be in the competition and 5 judges.
Judging will be based on best overall creative story. We will rate your story on a 1-10 scale.
The winner gets a free pat on the back. So this is no bullcrap competition! Good luck! I hope you people will join.
So if you wish to be in the competition just say so. I will take the first 15.
The first 5 people who want to be judges will be the judges. |
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| Renegade |
Yeah, sounds like a good idea. I'm in.
So what are the major prizes for the winners then? Free holiday to Hawaii or something? |
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| Orbax |
I hate real life stuff >< i get it every day...now if you had started it off like..."The forest slowly grew quiet. The man stopped, looking up through the branches and dazzling rays of striated sunlight. He closed his eyes and concentrated, wondering how long the forest had been still. Lost in his own reverie he had wandered from the path into the Faerd Dran. From the corner of his eye he saw a shadow flitting through the bushes. flicker...closer...flicker...closer...flicker..flicker..flicker.flicker.flicker. His mind grew numb. The pulse of the shadow was hypnotic,and it seemed to drain his body of willpower. He felt his eyes closing slowly, his legs going numb, and he fought against the words in his mind...sleep...sleep you fool. The last thing he heard was his body slumping down into darkness and the soft pitying sursurration...'fool'."
or something...hehe
maybe several categories of writing? |
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| Orbax |
or...
The shadows seemed to stretch endlessly as twilight settled on the plain. A lone figure stood among the sparse trees and shrubs. With the blood red sun throwing out its last desperate rays across the lightly clouded sky; and the dead waist high prairie grass gently sighing, the figure straightened. Throwing back his hood and cloak, his mail began to gleam like hell-fire in the setting sun. Reaching up with a gauntleted fist he grabbed the pendent that was his birthright. He stood, head bowed, the last king of a now non existent people. His grip tightened and his eyes began to glow more fiercely than the sun itself. Throwing back his head he howled more savagely than any beast, and cried out, "The world shall know my pain a thousand-fold! Let fires sweep the land! Let the rivers run red with blood! Let me have my revenge!"
I always start this kind of stuff, itd be interesting if I had to finish it lol. |
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| TranceGiant |
| quote: | Originally posted by Orbax
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The shadows seemed to stretch endlessly as twilight settled on the plain. A lone figure stood among the sparse trees and shrubs. With the blood red sun throwing out its last desperate rays across the lightly clouded sky; and the dead waist high prairie grass gently sighing, the figure straightened. Throwing back his hood and cloak, his mail began to gleam like hell-fire in the setting sun. Reaching up with a gauntleted fist he grabbed the pendent that was his birthright. He stood, head bowed, the last king of a now non existent people. His grip tightened and his eyes began to glow more fiercely than the sun itself. Throwing back his head he howled more savagely than any beast, and cried out, "The world shall know my pain a thousand-fold! Let fires sweep the land! Let the rivers run red with blood! Let me have my revenge!"
I always start this kind of stuff, itd be interesting if I had to finish it lol. |
LOL go on, continue please!:) |
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| DJ Sunburn |
| well orbax if you want to create on better that sort of revolves around a club scene that's what i would prefer:thepirate |
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