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| goodtime |
I have posted my music on here before. Some liked it, but others were disdainful. "Presety, "needed more layers, "oscillators", "effects" etc. One said I was good-looking, but I'm here to be taken seriously as a musician,thanks anyway though.
I thought I would explain myself, I am trying to get out of my depressive phase. If you get a chance tell me what you think of my new track, 'Die and Live'. I did it after I came out of jail. I was in jail for one night after my ex girlfriend (a Jew) called the cops when I called her, thus violating a protection order against me. It's a nothing case, she has no case really, but she's really angry with me, and I just wanted to find out if things were getting better or not, but no, and I got arrested (I'm not talking , it was horrible, and they kept me overnight, cos they said "maybe you will go looking for her, and we can't have that. The one female cop said, you must learn your lesson. It was really , a small cell, bread and water(which I threw on the floor, as a ' you' gesture. I nearly went mad in there. Ah so I made this song, it feels like a sad one, and yeah, I was really sad when I made it.
To hear'DIE AND LIVE' visit http://www.myspace.com/wesleyoakes |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Why did you need the feel to clarify she was a jew? What does that have to do with the music? |
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| Nick Cenik |
| Sketchy post... |
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| parafrNalia |
| quote: | Originally posted by goodtime
I have posted my music on here before. Some liked it, but others were disdainful. "Presety, "needed more layers, "oscillators", "effects" etc. One said I was good-looking, but I'm here to be taken seriously as a musician,thanks anyway though.
I thought I would explain myself, I am trying to get out of my depressive phase. If you get a chance tell me what you think of my new track, 'Die and Live'. I did it after I came out of jail. I was in jail for one night after my ex girlfriend (a Jew) called the cops when I called her, thus violating a protection order against me. It's a nothing case, she has no case really, but she's really angry with me, and I just wanted to find out if things were getting better or not, but no, and I got arrested (I'm not talking , it was horrible, and they kept me overnight, cos they said "maybe you will go looking for her, and we can't have that. The one female cop said, you must learn your lesson. It was really , a small cell, bread and water(which I threw on the floor, as a ' you' gesture. I nearly went mad in there. Ah so I made this song, it feels like a sad one, and yeah, I was really sad when I made it.
To hear'DIE AND LIVE' visit http://www.myspace.com/wesleyoakes |
One night in a holding cell almost made you go mad? |
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| goodtime |
| Hey I didn't know it was a dirty word to say Jew. Sorry, I won't do it again. |
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| goodtime |
| quote: | Originally posted by parafrNalia
One night in a holding cell almost made you go mad? |
Were you ever kept in one. If you were, then ok, you know it's not that bad, but the problem is you can't tell what time it is. All the time I just kep hearing, Nom-nom-nom-nom-Nom-nom-nom-nom. My latest work is going to be up in a couple of days. It also goes Nom-nom-nom-nom-Nom-nom-nom-nom. |
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| adi_hanson |
my little guidelines. To you.
1.Post your song.
2.Explain why you decided to make it.(briefly , not like your above post!)
3.As a begginer , Tell a little how you made it. Fl studio can be little belter in some areas.
4.Dont post asking for awards.
5.Look at other posts and learn.
good luck |
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| pwnage1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by goodtime
"(a Jew) called the cops"
"thus violating a protection order against me"
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No wonder she broke up with you your anti-semitic, and crazy. |
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| parafrNalia |
| quote: | Originally posted by goodtime
Were you ever kept in one. If you were, then ok, you know it's not that bad, but the problem is you can't tell what time it is. All the time I just kep hearing, Nom-nom-nom-nom-Nom-nom-nom-nom. My latest work is going to be up in a couple of days. It also goes Nom-nom-nom-nom-Nom-nom-nom-nom. |
Firstly, I was in the army. A lot worse than any holding cell, trust me. Secondly yes, I have visited the local holding cell. |
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| goodtime |
| thanks, but you needn't be ashamed it really is good, it is my favourite child. I would like it to grow and spawn more children. |
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| parafrNalia |
Don't try and hijack somebody else's thead, you retard. |
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